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Make a difference
A fortunately privileged white capitalist who loves to contradict,
Who loves to complain about anything he sees fit.
You see the problem with capitalism is it makes life too easy,
It removes the fight and allows us to become fat and lazy.
Capitalism is like mother and father both at the same time,
One day your worth a dollar the next not even a dime.
Get off your fucking ass you lazy human being,
Quit bitching about everything and start diplomatically disagreeing
You are no coward and that is for sure,
You show more bravery then most and fight for the cure.
Quit acting so fucking childish and ignorantly immature,
What more could life throw at you you've not already endured .
Get out their and make a difference
Quit behaving so absurd ,
No wonder your parents treat you like a giant human turd.
You act as if you think with the mind of a bird.
If you want to act like a bird at least portray one that is strong
An eagle for example awake hunting at dawn.
Get off your fucking ass and go make a difference
Quit being a lazy capitalist so blissfully ignorant.
Get off your fucking ass
Go make a difference
Thank your parents and quit believing your gibberish
Without their wisdom and lessons of life ,
your drive would have been insignificant you only know the taste of strife
Quite criticizing others until you criticize yourself
Start with a strong foundation upon which to build your house
Accept your faults and learn from your mistakes
Living is easy thriving is not
It takes a lot of effort and drive
So Stick to one plot.
You've only got one shot so give it all you've got.
Get off your fucking ass and go make a difference
You've only got one shot
Give it all you've got
Who loves to complain about anything he sees fit.
You see the problem with capitalism is it makes life too easy,
It removes the fight and allows us to become fat and lazy.
Capitalism is like mother and father both at the same time,
One day your worth a dollar the next not even a dime.
Get off your fucking ass you lazy human being,
Quit bitching about everything and start diplomatically disagreeing
You are no coward and that is for sure,
You show more bravery then most and fight for the cure.
Quit acting so fucking childish and ignorantly immature,
What more could life throw at you you've not already endured .
Get out their and make a difference
Quit behaving so absurd ,
No wonder your parents treat you like a giant human turd.
You act as if you think with the mind of a bird.
If you want to act like a bird at least portray one that is strong
An eagle for example awake hunting at dawn.
Get off your fucking ass and go make a difference
Quit being a lazy capitalist so blissfully ignorant.
Get off your fucking ass
Go make a difference
Thank your parents and quit believing your gibberish
Without their wisdom and lessons of life ,
your drive would have been insignificant you only know the taste of strife
Quite criticizing others until you criticize yourself
Start with a strong foundation upon which to build your house
Accept your faults and learn from your mistakes
Living is easy thriving is not
It takes a lot of effort and drive
So Stick to one plot.
You've only got one shot so give it all you've got.
Get off your fucking ass and go make a difference
You've only got one shot
Give it all you've got
Published 27th Mar 2017
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27th Mar 2017 8:50pm
'...Living is easy thriving is not
It takes a lot of effort and drive
So Stick to one plot...'
These words resonate well with me. I really enjoyed this part. Well done, Leo. (:
LostGirl
It takes a lot of effort and drive
So Stick to one plot...'
These words resonate well with me. I really enjoyed this part. Well done, Leo. (:
LostGirl
27th Mar 2017 9:52pm
Thank you for the feedback LostGirl :) Im hoping these words may inspire the people who may ponder upon them to discover the strengths they have and build off them and learn from valuable mistakes rather then dwell on how poorly we can feel at times and continue to plant a blame for the reason thimgs arent always great. And if the people who have already been through it and discovered these thoughts, discover this write and read, id just hope they enjoy it . Everyone can use some criticism but its criticizing ourselfs i feel we dont do properly. I have for the majority of my life juat beaten myself up over mistakes and learn very poorly from them , often repeating them . Again , thank you for taking the time to read my poetry . It truly means a lot to me .
