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Leaving

(ps. This is a rough draft. The two first boxes are verses. I haven't found out a chorus or a bridge yet, so don't be too brutal with the critique😂.)

(Imaginary Intro)

(Verse1)
Livings easy when you've got someone waiting for you. don't get me wrong I'm still suffering. something tells me that when I get home she wont be waiting on me, have I done something wrong.

(Imaginary chorus)

(Verse 2)
Living easy when I'm holding
 your hand the time slips by to fast just give me one more chance .that if I waited forever and in feeling so low a second wouldn't be wasted and I'm just happy you showed.

(Imaginary chorus)

(Imaginary bridge)

(Imaginary verse 3)

(Imaginary outro)
Written by Violetbackdrop (Christian)
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