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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Aug 2011 5:53am
21st Aug 2011 5:52am
These are more senryu rather than standard haiku...haiku is more about nature, and senryu is about human nature....although given the western approach, both sides can be argued into the ground...by traditional standards though this would be considered senryu. :) Other than the formalities at hand, I love them...
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2018 12:45pm
21st Aug 2011 10:28am
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