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Adore
Always my passion
most precious love I've known
could not live without you
caring not to stand alone
Beside you I am whole
never more complete
loving me always
no others compete
All the parts of you
my lover, I adore
my existence
soul mates ever more
Holding you in my heart
desire embraced
feel how much I love you
you are my saving grace
most precious love I've known
could not live without you
caring not to stand alone
Beside you I am whole
never more complete
loving me always
no others compete
All the parts of you
my lover, I adore
my existence
soul mates ever more
Holding you in my heart
desire embraced
feel how much I love you
you are my saving grace
Published 5th Mar 2017
| Edited 20th Jan 2018
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17th Mar 2017 00:42am
The personal atmosphere is very strong, bold, and very romantic. the rhythm feels a little strange, as the rhyming feels a little stiff. but the strong emotional disclosure is truly sweet and touching, especially for an romantic event.
