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Shiny blood~dripping knives
Where will you be tonight?
Behind the shadows
Dancing in the darkness
If you let me hold yours
I'll certainly share mine
I promise to behave
Only if you want me to
Its so sharp
feels really
sexy
so shiny
so scary
Is that blood or
lipstick?
Can you feel that
I can too
Oh the chaos and mayhem
We could get into
The fun will be had by all
An ode to you
from me
Lunatic63
(JREED81)
( entered in Jades untold DUP tribute Comp )
Where will you be tonight?
Behind the shadows
Dancing in the darkness
If you let me hold yours
I'll certainly share mine
I promise to behave
Only if you want me to
Its so sharp
feels really
sexy
so shiny
so scary
Is that blood or
lipstick?
Can you feel that
I can too
Oh the chaos and mayhem
We could get into
The fun will be had by all
An ode to you
from me
Lunatic63
(JREED81)
( entered in Jades untold DUP tribute Comp )
Published 2nd Mar 2017
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2nd Mar 2017 9:20am
I'm kinda partial to keeping MY blood inside my body! but hey, spreading lipstick
all over... that does sound like fun! lol
Seriously though a nice slightly twisted dark spill! :)
all over... that does sound like fun! lol
Seriously though a nice slightly twisted dark spill! :)
2nd Mar 2017 11:53pm
2nd Mar 2017 11:37am
2nd Mar 2017 11:54pm
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Mar 2017 7:40pm
2nd Mar 2017 2:29pm
Mmmmm... Sent chills up my spine. You know just how to speak to me.
I'm honored. I don't really know what to say. No one's ever dedicated their work to me. You're an awesome poet. This is even better than positive comments on my own work. Thank you.
I'm honored. I don't really know what to say. No one's ever dedicated their work to me. You're an awesome poet. This is even better than positive comments on my own work. Thank you.
2nd Mar 2017 11:55pm
You are so very welcome, Lunatic. We speak the same language, babe. love to you. <3
3rd Mar 2017 3:00pm
"Is that blood or
lipstick?"
I really loved the atmospherics of this piece could really feel the tension - I love the line question above it really got my creative juices flowing - stay tuned :-)
lipstick?"
I really loved the atmospherics of this piece could really feel the tension - I love the line question above it really got my creative juices flowing - stay tuned :-)
3rd Mar 2017 3:30pm
