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Troubles
Troubles all around
Dancing on the ground
Making people cry
Just wanting to die
Love is art or its a grave
You will just go astray
Confused with life or heavens way
Okay so I did post this on Wattpad to so just saying didnt copy!
Dancing on the ground
Making people cry
Just wanting to die
Love is art or its a grave
You will just go astray
Confused with life or heavens way
Okay so I did post this on Wattpad to so just saying didnt copy!
Published 20th Feb 2017
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20th Feb 2017 1:48am
20th Feb 2017 6:26am
20th Feb 2017 11:19am
I like the personification of the troubles in how they dance. Welcome to DU. X
20th Feb 2017 3:38pm
Thank-You!!! I usually write small things and usually get bad criticism, I wrote that small one back in 7th grade
