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Bouquet of sins
When love lets us suffer, poetry brings us back-
A ballad is not just a poem or an experience, but pieces
of our souls bled onto paper like a virgin whore
on tainted linens. Or perhaps it is the sorrow
of a woman of night, burdened with the name of a saint.
She is no saint and deviant perversions are her refuge
as her humanity becomes lost in the apogee
of demand.
Her heart still beats
and I weep for us both.
I see beauty and it is my curse to see the world
through too many pairs of eyes. They are my passion,
my addiction and I want to compose them on
canvas painted colorfields to adorn
the emotion hidden behind every shade
of living rondure, with sketchbook
and carbon sunbeams.
Seduced by a storm of flame
and umber, I fell into the lurid haze
of my lover's watch. I stood in the eye
of the storm and savored the taste of ash
on the wind, desperate to be carried
in the gales of untamed romance.
My heart still beats
and the sky weeps for us both.
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Re. Bouquet of sins
18th Feb 2017 12:05pm
woman of night, caught between passion & rain;
I can see lovers ambushed by the storm...
I can see lovers ambushed by the storm...
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Re: Re. Bouquet of sins
18th Feb 2017 1:44pm
Between passion and rain lies the most dangerous storm of all, and lovers dwell in the eye of it. Such pretty words, John, thank you...
Re. Bouquet of sins
18th Feb 2017 12:49pm
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19th Feb 2017 1:49am
Thanks for the RL and kind words, much appreciated. I think alot of us have that addiction, maybe just different degrees of it that manifest in various ways...
Re. Bouquet of sins
18th Feb 2017 2:09pm
This is beautiful... tears at my heart with its quiet yet profuse passion...
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Re: Re. Bouquet of sins
19th Feb 2017 1:39am
Perhaps quiet passion speaks from a deeper place sometimes. Thank you for the thoughtful words and visit...
Re. Bouquet of sins
18th Feb 2017 2:37pm
This is a mournful song of the Spirit for the manifestation of love, Kasai. Beautifully and soulfully done.
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Re: Re. Bouquet of sins
19th Feb 2017 1:51am
Thank you wise one, your words leave me with smiles. Such beauty to behold, even in our sadness...
Re. Bouquet of sins
18th Feb 2017 3:12pm
Great imagery! The first line sets the tone perfectly, "When love lets us suffer, poetry brings us back".
That'll grip the heart of any poet and make us want to drink the blood of the verse to follow... even the bitter sweetness is a flavor to savor!
JJ
That'll grip the heart of any poet and make us want to drink the blood of the verse to follow... even the bitter sweetness is a flavor to savor!
JJ
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Re: Re. Bouquet of sins
19th Feb 2017 00:42am
I truly appreciate that, thanks for the great comment, JJ. And yes, the bittersweet taste of poetry is an enjoyable one...
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Anonymous
18th Feb 2017 3:38pm
Truly breathtaking. So many favorite portions.
Felt so deeply, are your words.
Another keeper for me.
Felt so deeply, are your words.
Another keeper for me.
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19th Feb 2017 00:37am
Re. Bouquet of sins
19th Feb 2017 3:02am
The depth of your heart and soul must be boundless, Kasai. You keep delving and bringing out the most beautiful pieces of art to grace us with. Your gallery is beyond walls by now.
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Bouquet of sins
19th Feb 2017 3:15am
That's beautiful, Willow, thank you so much. The lovely words you leave me with are deeply appreciated sweet lady...
Re. Bouquet of sins
19th Feb 2017 1:19pm
The first line drew me in immediately...
Such a passionate piece... the bittersweet flavor of love...
Such a passionate piece... the bittersweet flavor of love...
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Thanks, Duende, always appreciate your amazing comments.
So glad you decided to keep it...
So glad you decided to keep it...
Re. Bouquet of sins
20th Feb 2017 1:01am
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20th Feb 2017 5:57am