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So that is my sin

At imperfection of my lines
You point right every time
You say it and ask again
To open to you all my pain

I think I could do it but
Inside me there's a stop
That isn't letting me it
It's on the way, no sleep

You think it's my wish only
But it's something stronger
It's inability to do it now
To fix it I don't know how

Anyhow you know much more
That others could hope for
About my whole life and me
I am trying, just believe
Written by LanaW
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