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Just So
.
They'll be just so
Colour and design
I've yet decided upon
But..maybe they already lay
comfortably within the back
of my drawer
There's a chance I've already
displayed sexy within the mirror
practiced in pulling them down
Prefer you to do that
but you not here so allow me
my bold sexy approach
But whatever is and isn't
It will most certainly be real
as you will be.
They'll be just so
Colour and design
I've yet decided upon
But..maybe they already lay
comfortably within the back
of my drawer
There's a chance I've already
displayed sexy within the mirror
practiced in pulling them down
Prefer you to do that
but you not here so allow me
my bold sexy approach
But whatever is and isn't
It will most certainly be real
as you will be.
Published 11th Feb 2017
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18th Feb 2017 7:58pm
"But whatever is and isn't
It will most certainly be real
as you will be."
Strong finish. The last verse sums your poem up nicely. Nice work.
It will most certainly be real
as you will be."
Strong finish. The last verse sums your poem up nicely. Nice work.
18th Feb 2017 8:05pm
Creativity in giving
Before the inevitable realism
makes it so so beautiful
Before the inevitable realism
makes it so so beautiful
