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Risky Love
Give me your heart and
I swear to protect it
For I could never hurt
a heart that mirrors mine
Perhaps the trust
will come with time
Your heart will become
my very own shrine
I promise to be gentle
with it, loving and kind
We both hate the fakery
and refuse to be clones
Except the similarity
of having skin and bones
So why do we go on
pretending to fit in?
Surely we are denying
and living in sin?
Perhaps we are two halves
each begging to be whole
Loving one another
Should be our one true goal
I know you have rags
rather than riches
Money means nothing
i'm not like those bitches
I want the inner you
the good and the bad
I don't care if sometimes
you happen to make me sad
No regret if you leave me
I'll remember what we both had
I swear to protect it
For I could never hurt
a heart that mirrors mine
Perhaps the trust
will come with time
Your heart will become
my very own shrine
I promise to be gentle
with it, loving and kind
We both hate the fakery
and refuse to be clones
Except the similarity
of having skin and bones
So why do we go on
pretending to fit in?
Surely we are denying
and living in sin?
Perhaps we are two halves
each begging to be whole
Loving one another
Should be our one true goal
I know you have rags
rather than riches
Money means nothing
i'm not like those bitches
I want the inner you
the good and the bad
I don't care if sometimes
you happen to make me sad
No regret if you leave me
I'll remember what we both had
Published 13th Jan 2017
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13th Jan 2017 11:57am
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13th Jan 2017 12:05pm
13th Jan 2017 12:06pm
Such an honest write... one I can relate to!
"Money means nothing
i'm not like those bitches
I want the inner you
the good and the bad" > if only more people were like this!
"Money means nothing
i'm not like those bitches
I want the inner you
the good and the bad" > if only more people were like this!
13th Jan 2017 1:24pm
Thanks beautiful D!
Indeed! Perhaps then we wouldn't have to endure the pain if people could just accept us for who we are 'the good and the bad'
FC
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Indeed! Perhaps then we wouldn't have to endure the pain if people could just accept us for who we are 'the good and the bad'
FC
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13th Jan 2017 1:01pm
This is an honest plea, these words. From beginning to end, it was great. My favorite lines...
"We both hate the fakery
and refuse to be clones
Except the similarity
of having skin and bones"
So often we forget we're all different and still all the same. I sometimes wonder if we'd hurt others as easily if we felt every pain we inflicted simultaneously. And those last lines...perfect! :)
Willow
"We both hate the fakery
and refuse to be clones
Except the similarity
of having skin and bones"
So often we forget we're all different and still all the same. I sometimes wonder if we'd hurt others as easily if we felt every pain we inflicted simultaneously. And those last lines...perfect! :)
Willow
13th Jan 2017 1:33pm
Thanks Wonderful Willow!
We sure do so it's nice to remember sometimes.
I doubt we would to avoid feeling the pain ourselves but it saddens me to think it would take us to feel the pain to stop hurting others...and in hurting others I guess we are hurting ourselves anyway. Many thanks for your great comment and praise much appreciated!
FC
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We sure do so it's nice to remember sometimes.
I doubt we would to avoid feeling the pain ourselves but it saddens me to think it would take us to feel the pain to stop hurting others...and in hurting others I guess we are hurting ourselves anyway. Many thanks for your great comment and praise much appreciated!
FC
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13th Jan 2017 5:14pm
Such a beautiful n giving soul you possess n it shows in this sweet ink... "No regret if you leave me
I'll remember what we both had..."
THAT takes a very special person to feel n be that way!
I'll remember what we both had..."
THAT takes a very special person to feel n be that way!
13th Jan 2017 5:18pm
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14th Jan 2017 3:09am
14th Jan 2017 8:09am
Bless you Eclipse... I'm sure there are an abundance out there :) and thank you for your kind comment!
FC
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14th Jan 2017 5:05am
Hehe.. so wonderful 🤗 Not like those bitches is a good thing for sure 😁
Really love the first lines a lot as well. Especially the part about the shrine 😊
Really love the first lines a lot as well. Especially the part about the shrine 😊
14th Jan 2017 8:14am
Aww thanks DevilsChild haha not one of my proudest lines but ah well I'm only human! Hehe. Thank you kindly 😆
FC
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14th Jan 2017 10:08am
You should be proud of it. Sometimes you just need to say it raw. Although you should know I would tell you that... haha 🤗
All feelings can be turned into art. Any kind of words can represent that art, if done right 😬
All feelings can be turned into art. Any kind of words can represent that art, if done right 😬
14th Jan 2017 10:24am
Yep no point fighting it. Thank you DevilsChild you're so kind and encouraging it's a pleasure to have you around! ☺
FC
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15th Jan 2017 12:41pm
this is full of tender declarations, always a risk with matters of the heart...
enjoyed this..
enjoyed this..
15th Jan 2017 3:58pm
Thanks FreeLove87 for stopping by and leaving a comment. Indeed it is and glad you enjoyed it :)
FC
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24th Jan 2017 2:51pm
Money means nothing...My favorite line...You will always get by if you have love. The most beautiful things in life are free and we need to appreciate them more.
24th Jan 2017 8:27pm
Thanks for stopping by JusTim and leaving a great comment. I couldn't agree more! FC 💜
