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To those who judge on DU...

Interpret my writing how you will,
I am only here to share it.
I'm not here to please the critics,
As im not as qualified as most.
I express my point of view in my own way,
And my feelings without going into detail.
This isn't poetry as such,
It's me telling DU how I see things.
I take a simplistic approach to writing.
I get my point across.
Without every little detail.
Some appreciate this,
Others hate,
But if you are so much better,
Then focus on your own writing.
This is an outlet for many,
Those of us who just want a release,
I don't mind critique. But make it constructive.
Writing doesn't come naturally to everyone,
As it clearly does for some on here.
So leave those who are learning and growing alone,
Because it's not about a select few who live on here,
It's about the whole DU community.
So to those who judge on here who aren't literature majors,
Browsing with a large carrot up there arse,
Your not exactly qualified, And thus you can't make such informed criticism.
This is my first judgement,
Just encourage and don't destroy others confidence,
If its not constructive feedback,
It's not wanted.
We all write because we enjoy it,
Everyone has an expressive language,  
If its not the same as yours,
Its because we are all individuals.
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