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Tunnels
As i feel the snow start to cave
Heavy visions of what has been,
I had a beautiful soul to save,
Double sided pain, so easy to pin.
She just could not behave,
Serrated promises, igniting our sin.
Another mad minute, seconds to slave,
Drifting past the words, Never again
By:Tyler V.Quarello
(Trip)
Heavy visions of what has been,
I had a beautiful soul to save,
Double sided pain, so easy to pin.
She just could not behave,
Serrated promises, igniting our sin.
Another mad minute, seconds to slave,
Drifting past the words, Never again
By:Tyler V.Quarello
(Trip)
Published 29th Dec 2016
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29th Dec 2016 11:13pm
I like it because I was intrigued but in a sense I feel that it was so reserved that I could not relate. By reserved I mean to say it was personal.
29th Dec 2016 11:57pm
Thank you ^w^ your input is greatly appreciated, and i shall attempt to incorporate more tied together imagery that is more relatable in my future poems c: i am glad you like it!
