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Living Life in Limbo.
I don't want to live
Yet I don't want to die
I'm trapped in a living hell
I can't move forward
No matter how I try
My feet are set in concrete
My mind confused
Belittled heartbroken and abused
Foggy not sure what is real no more
i feel a thousand cuts of intense pain
Emanating from my core.
No love in my life
I wither
Silent tears flow like a river
Climbing a new mountain everyday
Watching others getting on happy
Upon my way.
Tormented haunted by my horrific past
Dreams and hopes just shards of glass
Won't Someone take my hand
and lead me to a world I understand and can finally breath out
And live
I have so much love to give.
The walls are closing in.
Peter Dome. Copyright..2016.
Yet I don't want to die
I'm trapped in a living hell
I can't move forward
No matter how I try
My feet are set in concrete
My mind confused
Belittled heartbroken and abused
Foggy not sure what is real no more
i feel a thousand cuts of intense pain
Emanating from my core.
No love in my life
I wither
Silent tears flow like a river
Climbing a new mountain everyday
Watching others getting on happy
Upon my way.
Tormented haunted by my horrific past
Dreams and hopes just shards of glass
Won't Someone take my hand
and lead me to a world I understand and can finally breath out
And live
I have so much love to give.
The walls are closing in.
Peter Dome. Copyright..2016.
Published 26th Dec 2016
| Edited 7th Jan 2017
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haa, feel better already,
too much say but not enough,
this reminds me of a quote I
once read in my youth...
"Don't drown before the waters
let you in"
of course, at such a time..
my mind spoke and said:
"Well, when will that be?"
Hmph..life is the beautiful ugliness
-Howlings
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haa, feel better already,
too much say but not enough,
this reminds me of a quote I
once read in my youth...
"Don't drown before the waters
let you in"
of course, at such a time..
my mind spoke and said:
"Well, when will that be?"
Hmph..life is the beautiful ugliness
-Howlings
26th Dec 2016 12:47pm
Good advice friend. Apart from that, I'm ok. one of my happier writes ha ha. Thiink I drunk too much Sanity juice last night. Thank you. Best wishes. Moog. Burp.ppppp.
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Dec 2016 2:23pm
26th Dec 2016 2:22pm
You have so much to give, so give it. That is the simple answer here. When you give you will eventually receive. Very well written poem but stark in its description of hopelessness & despair. But you are aware of how you're feeling & that is a start. I believe you can turn things around but it starts with you making those first difficult steps. You will one day lead where others will follow.
26th Dec 2016 5:05pm
ni a d thank you for your wise words and kind comments. I do try. I try all the time and give my love in some way to everyone everyday. no matter who they are but I'm still alone. I appreciate you stopping by. my best wishes. Lets hope next year will be better for everyone. perhaps not, but we must have hope, or we have nothing. Moog.
28th Dec 2016 7:06am
It was a good read, the ending line was my favorite line from your poem! Keep up the good work! Also the drreams and hopes line was attention catching as well.
28th Dec 2016 6:22pm
Thank you so much glad you enjoyed it. One of my happier ones ha ha. take good care. best wishes.moog/
28th Dec 2016 7:13am
28th Dec 2016 6:20pm
9th Jan 2017 6:52pm
9th Jan 2017 7:38pm
Thank you for stopping by. I'm sorry if you could relate to this in some way. My best wishes. moog.
3rd Feb 2017 5:41am
You have so much to give, try to remember to give some to yourself. Others have felt this pain and still feel it. And when reading this they can know that they are not alone.
