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Primal (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
It's been
a long week
now I'm ready
to freak
so let's freak
come up with
crazy things
write profanity
on our body's
dress you up
like Dorothy
going to Oz
the porn parody
playing with
the pendulum
back and forth
between love & lust
it's been
a long week
pick me up
and take me
away
far away to
another place
turn my
thoughts off
and my
body on
write poetry
on my skin
with your
alcoholic shots
be the lion
and tear
this ass up
don't be cowardly
no fear
man of steel
this is primal
I'm open
let's go
no fear
come here
I got my
cock ring on
gets me
super hard
baby, lick
my meat stick
while your pussy
plays with
that new toy
got it yesterday
over night
Fed Ex
for your pleasure
vibrates
on different levels
turn it up
as I stiffen up
In and out
against your clit
keep it going
till my dick's
drenched in spit
nice and ready
for some fucking
toy in hand
going in and out
mmmm...
bring that dick
to my mouth
I want to taste
until you
scream and shout
getting you
ready
to tap this
ass
I am dripping
wet
licking it up
fun is over
it is time to
get rough
bend me
over
pull my hair
bite and
scratch
as my ass
is in the air
pump
it in and
out
harder
yeah...
right there
let's get you
to the stairs
arch your back
while I
take my hand
smack your ass
have no qualms
when it comes to
getting off
two hand grip
giving you
this dick
pulling back
your hair
laying into
that pussy bare
like it's the last
piece of ass
I'll ever get
building up
make me cum
want to
fill you all
the way up
fill me up
till that cum
runs out
gripping hard
full of lust
pounding
fast
with your
dirty thrusts
stretching
what is so
tight
damn,
everything about
you feels
so right
sweat is
dripping
as the scent of
sex is in the air
suckling the
flavor
don't stop
go faster
I am
almost there
turn around
I want to watch
those eyes
roll to the back
of your skull
I want to
feel your hips
clench against mine
moan, baby
as I groan, baby
let it all go
let the whole
neighborhood know
just how
fucking sounds
breathless moans
screaming your
name
as intense pleasure
saturates
without any
shame
fucking you
as you
fuck me
no stopping
until we get
our, mmmm...
release
letting go
being free
that is
the only
way to be
a long week
now I'm ready
to freak
so let's freak
come up with
crazy things
write profanity
on our body's
dress you up
like Dorothy
going to Oz
the porn parody
playing with
the pendulum
back and forth
between love & lust
it's been
a long week
pick me up
and take me
away
far away to
another place
turn my
thoughts off
and my
body on
write poetry
on my skin
with your
alcoholic shots
be the lion
and tear
this ass up
don't be cowardly
no fear
man of steel
this is primal
I'm open
let's go
no fear
come here
I got my
cock ring on
gets me
super hard
baby, lick
my meat stick
while your pussy
plays with
that new toy
got it yesterday
over night
Fed Ex
for your pleasure
vibrates
on different levels
turn it up
as I stiffen up
In and out
against your clit
keep it going
till my dick's
drenched in spit
nice and ready
for some fucking
toy in hand
going in and out
mmmm...
bring that dick
to my mouth
I want to taste
until you
scream and shout
getting you
ready
to tap this
ass
I am dripping
wet
licking it up
fun is over
it is time to
get rough
bend me
over
pull my hair
bite and
scratch
as my ass
is in the air
pump
it in and
out
harder
yeah...
right there
let's get you
to the stairs
arch your back
while I
take my hand
smack your ass
have no qualms
when it comes to
getting off
two hand grip
giving you
this dick
pulling back
your hair
laying into
that pussy bare
like it's the last
piece of ass
I'll ever get
building up
make me cum
want to
fill you all
the way up
fill me up
till that cum
runs out
gripping hard
full of lust
pounding
fast
with your
dirty thrusts
stretching
what is so
tight
damn,
everything about
you feels
so right
sweat is
dripping
as the scent of
sex is in the air
suckling the
flavor
don't stop
go faster
I am
almost there
turn around
I want to watch
those eyes
roll to the back
of your skull
I want to
feel your hips
clench against mine
moan, baby
as I groan, baby
let it all go
let the whole
neighborhood know
just how
fucking sounds
breathless moans
screaming your
name
as intense pleasure
saturates
without any
shame
fucking you
as you
fuck me
no stopping
until we get
our, mmmm...
release
letting go
being free
that is
the only
way to be
Published 24th Dec 2016
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Anonymous
24th Dec 2016 6:35pm
I love this write!
Thank you for the opportunity, to write with you again.
All flows so effortlessly with you.
You pushed me on this one, and I am so glad that you did.
Definitely our...freaky, fun, free write.
Much love to you, my treasured friend 💓
Thank you for the opportunity, to write with you again.
All flows so effortlessly with you.
You pushed me on this one, and I am so glad that you did.
Definitely our...freaky, fun, free write.
Much love to you, my treasured friend 💓
24th Dec 2016 6:39pm
I think we could of kept writing. This could of been a book long. Maybe next time we will fire up the coffee 😉
Though I will say I do feel this poem is missing something. I mean, I like using my hand, but... oh well 🤗 Hehe.
Always greatful for your friendship. Thanks, truly.
Though I will say I do feel this poem is missing something. I mean, I like using my hand, but... oh well 🤗 Hehe.
Always greatful for your friendship. Thanks, truly.
Anonymous
24th Dec 2016 11:10pm
It could have been a book long, I agree.
Next time...we will continue, just to see where all goes;)
I adore writing with you. It definitely helps to keep the mind occupied on other things.
I think we cheered one another up, perfectly with this piece:)
Next time...we will continue, just to see where all goes;)
I adore writing with you. It definitely helps to keep the mind occupied on other things.
I think we cheered one another up, perfectly with this piece:)
25th Dec 2016 7:33am
I totally thought you were gonna say something about the chicken. And no, I'm not letting it go 😂
Merry Christmas my lovely friend 😃🎄
Merry Christmas my lovely friend 😃🎄
Anonymous
25th Dec 2016 1:44pm
As I said to Heart: :)
I so seriously need to find me some of this! You two are quite adept at taking the reader on one helluva ride! I don't know how you do it...doesn't matter. Your voices merge perfectly. Keep them coming! I've got plenty of cold water in my shower. :)
Willow
I so seriously need to find me some of this! You two are quite adept at taking the reader on one helluva ride! I don't know how you do it...doesn't matter. Your voices merge perfectly. Keep them coming! I've got plenty of cold water in my shower. :)
Willow
26th Dec 2016 9:09am
I love working with Heart. Once we agree on an idea the flow comes out perfectly :-)
Thanks for enjoying ;-)
Thanks for enjoying ;-)
25th Dec 2016 7:58pm
Lives up to the 'Primal' of the title, a couple that are no-holds-barred 'at it'.
26th Dec 2016 9:11am
Me and Heart wanted to write a poem that was just free. Just write our words as raw as possible. It is a favorite of mine for sure ^^
26th Dec 2016 7:46am
The length of this piece was never a factor,
Passionate excitement from begging to end keeps
the reader's attention.
Amazing collaboration....
Passionate excitement from begging to end keeps
the reader's attention.
Amazing collaboration....
26th Dec 2016 9:13am
I was worried of the length, but after reading it, it just worked. I could of kept writing really. I had so much fun with this :-)
31st Dec 2016 8:43am
Ahem... I think I just choked on my tea :-/
This is a hot piece of ehm... poem
Great write you both ;-)
This is a hot piece of ehm... poem
Great write you both ;-)
