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Not such a Noble Knight.
I'm a noble knight
But in rusty armour
My horse isn't really a horse
but a stubborn mule
I came last at Knight school
My sword is bent
my armour full of dents
I see a Dragon or a fight
I run I take flight
In fact I'm not a knight at all
failed the test
to fat too small
The only damsels I attract
are Damsel flies from the trees
But still I dream
One day.
Peter Dome.Copyright.2012.
But in rusty armour
My horse isn't really a horse
but a stubborn mule
I came last at Knight school
My sword is bent
my armour full of dents
I see a Dragon or a fight
I run I take flight
In fact I'm not a knight at all
failed the test
to fat too small
The only damsels I attract
are Damsel flies from the trees
But still I dream
One day.
Peter Dome.Copyright.2012.
Published 22nd Dec 2016
| Edited 23rd Dec 2016
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22nd Dec 2016 8:04am
"It is only wise to practice with the mule before buying a horse...".
"Fake it until you make it....".
So, keep dreaming. You will make it!!!
Short & sweet & easy-read poem....😊
"Fake it until you make it....".
So, keep dreaming. You will make it!!!
Short & sweet & easy-read poem....😊
22nd Dec 2016 8:08am
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22nd Dec 2016 11:23am
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23rd Dec 2016 10:24am
Hi there Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it.Thanks for the scratch. I'm a little pig. Moog.
Anonymous
28th Dec 2016 11:12pm
i absolutely adore this. Great writing. Can't wait to dive into more of your stuff. :)
28th Dec 2016 11:17pm
Thank you s much Glad you enjoyed. nice to meet you. your kind words mean a lot to me. take good care. best wishes. moog.
9th Jan 2017 6:58pm
12th Jan 2017 12:28pm
thank yo so much. Being from near Nottingham. it all hapoened around here. I'd like to see that poem of yours. Take care. Pete.
