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RENGA: Jade Tiger
deep blankets
leaves whisper under feet
poet's words
darkest night
single candle glowing
the world itself
alley cat's song
the poet's open window
notes on pages
virgin block, green stone
Master Carver's vision craft
prized above worth
leaves whisper under feet
poet's words
darkest night
single candle glowing
the world itself
alley cat's song
the poet's open window
notes on pages
virgin block, green stone
Master Carver's vision craft
prized above worth
Published 4th Dec 2016
| Edited 22nd Jul 2018
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4th Dec 2016 9:53am
SweetOblivion you are very gracious... Here I must give credit to my sufi/roshi/sensei - the haijin that has given me such appropriate instruction and assistance, has allowed me the honor of collaboration on several pieces and continues to give freely of her knowledge and education - Jade Pandora...
SO much help she has shown me in all my forms, I shall be forever in her debt...
As for me, I am glad I remain teachable and listening intently to the sunlit fog in the redwoods that whispers Muse's lines to me...
geoff
SO much help she has shown me in all my forms, I shall be forever in her debt...
As for me, I am glad I remain teachable and listening intently to the sunlit fog in the redwoods that whispers Muse's lines to me...
geoff
4th Dec 2016 6:38pm
You are adept so take the credit and share it if you will - it is freely given to both of you.
