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Are you down?
Love, tell me…are you down?
To take a journey with me until the ultimate satisfaction is found
To grant me access to the pleasure I seek
To give me a sample…I only want a peek
Of what you say you’re holding back
I’ll still love you afterwards…don’t be like that
I want you to expose your nastiest desires
Allow me to surpass your filthiest thoughts…and douse that fire
I don’t judge …I just want to see
You may fool everyone else, but I know how nasty you can be
I’m not just talking, my thoughts are real
But how can I express it to you if you can’t feel…
My breath on your skin
As I kiss you…my hands convince you to give in
Looking into my eyes…you know my heart
No judgement passed I’m just here to play my part
Just give me one night
I promise my love will make it right
Let’s replace those years of heartbreak
With the love I have for you and surrender to our fate
Honestly, I only have one question
Are you willing to give it all up?….and make me your only obsession
I want to crave you like nothing else exists
And every time I close my eyes…I’ll reminisce
Of your kiss…the smell of your cologne
Thoughts of you inside causing me to moan…
Out loud…catching myself, I bite my lips
Hand travels south as I rotate my hips
Nipples erect…visible through my t-shirt
My pussy yearning for your touch…throbbing so intense it hurts
Damn, I just want you around
So baby tell me…are you down?
To take a journey with me until the ultimate satisfaction is found
To grant me access to the pleasure I seek
To give me a sample…I only want a peek
Of what you say you’re holding back
I’ll still love you afterwards…don’t be like that
I want you to expose your nastiest desires
Allow me to surpass your filthiest thoughts…and douse that fire
I don’t judge …I just want to see
You may fool everyone else, but I know how nasty you can be
I’m not just talking, my thoughts are real
But how can I express it to you if you can’t feel…
My breath on your skin
As I kiss you…my hands convince you to give in
Looking into my eyes…you know my heart
No judgement passed I’m just here to play my part
Just give me one night
I promise my love will make it right
Let’s replace those years of heartbreak
With the love I have for you and surrender to our fate
Honestly, I only have one question
Are you willing to give it all up?….and make me your only obsession
I want to crave you like nothing else exists
And every time I close my eyes…I’ll reminisce
Of your kiss…the smell of your cologne
Thoughts of you inside causing me to moan…
Out loud…catching myself, I bite my lips
Hand travels south as I rotate my hips
Nipples erect…visible through my t-shirt
My pussy yearning for your touch…throbbing so intense it hurts
Damn, I just want you around
So baby tell me…are you down?
Written by
Lyrical_Temptation
Published 3rd Dec 2016
| Edited 4th Dec 2016
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Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 4:57am
I've gotten to a point where I really don't care anymore. I write what I feel like writing at the time. It pops in my head, I write/text, then post. So, don't overthink this ink. It's meant to be simple. Take it for what it is. 💋
Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 5:17am
I'm down!!!
I like the way you grind with that booty on me
Shorty you a dime, why you lookin' lonely?
Go buy another round and it's all on me
As long as I'm around put it down on me
Love that song. It just popped in my head after reading your lascivious ink!
I like the way you grind with that booty on me
Shorty you a dime, why you lookin' lonely?
Go buy another round and it's all on me
As long as I'm around put it down on me
Love that song. It just popped in my head after reading your lascivious ink!
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Re: Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 9:58am
Okay baby, sing that shit!!! Lol 😂 Always a pleasure when you stop by! Thanks for the read and laugh love.💋💋💋
Re: Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 4:02pm
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3rd Dec 2016 6:45am
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3rd Dec 2016 9:59am
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Re: Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 10:07am
Glad to know you're down baby!!! I knew you would be even if no one else was.👄👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅💋💋💋💋
Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 7:35am
down to drowm
into the erotic abyss
of temptation?
of course..
love how your journey evokes
the ejaculation of erotic thoughts
into the erotic abyss
of temptation?
of course..
love how your journey evokes
the ejaculation of erotic thoughts
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Re: Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 10:14am
Lol ok, down to drown huh? Temptation is afoot Naajir...can you handle it?
Hmm..."can you handle it?", sounds like a great question to expand on. You're always an inspiration, even when you don't intend to be. 💋💋💋
Hmm..."can you handle it?", sounds like a great question to expand on. You're always an inspiration, even when you don't intend to be. 💋💋💋
Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 7:52am
As the consensus states: I'm down too!!! Really really rreeeaaalllyyyy DOWN... but, sadly
this kinda heated, joyful, heaven on earth is nowhere around (for me). Explosively ignitin' spill my dear!!
this kinda heated, joyful, heaven on earth is nowhere around (for me). Explosively ignitin' spill my dear!!
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Re: Re. Are you down?
3rd Dec 2016 10:04am
Dnt worry my love...that ink we talked about should be posted tomorrow. Bet I can turn that frown upside-down like no one can! 💋💋💋👅👅👅👅💋💋💋
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Re: Re. Are you down?
4th Dec 2016 7:13pm
Aww...and I always love the way you comment! Thanks for the read love!!! 💋👅💋
Re. Are you down?
6th Dec 2016 4:53pm
OooooWeeee....the sincerity of your desires. The realness as to what you want and the fire you would tread to get to it. Am I down? Fuck yeah and oh to fuck U. That's what words like this will do love.
#iamsodamneddown 😇😋😈😍
#iamsodamneddown 😇😋😈😍
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Re: Re. Are you down?
6th Dec 2016 6:16pm
Damn love...where you been?
Fuck yeah?...mmm hmm. Glad to know you're down Archie. This ink is just an example of me using my "mouthpiece" to get what I want. When ppl speak of someone who can "talk you out yo drawers"....that would be me. 😆😂 Lol, I've missed you love!!! 💋👅💋👅
Fuck yeah?...mmm hmm. Glad to know you're down Archie. This ink is just an example of me using my "mouthpiece" to get what I want. When ppl speak of someone who can "talk you out yo drawers"....that would be me. 😆😂 Lol, I've missed you love!!! 💋👅💋👅
Re. Are you down?
Anonymous
31st Dec 2016 2:33am
this has been a pleasant visit to your sensual thoughts. thanks
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Re: Re. Are you down?
31st Dec 2016 3:56am
Thank you love. So glad that you could enjoy my ink. Thanks for visiting sweetheart.
Re. Are you down?
7th Jan 2017 7:11am
"Are you willing to give it all up?….and make me your only obsession"
Oooooh if only you would TAKE IT from the deepest core of my nastiest
Realm of red flames of fire wanting to consume you in my all making you
My only obsession not because I gave it up but you dare to take it like
The woman you are, the whore I deserve and the Goddess I demand
To make me scream her name like a raging wildfire begging to be drenched
In your soaking wet ocean waves of juices I thirst for with my face buried
Deep locking my tongue on your swollen erect clit sucking you like a mad man
Hungry for every drop begging to lick your sweet sensual lips laced with my cream!
Are you down to cum in every imaginable way to your ultimate orgasm?
Oooooh if only you would TAKE IT from the deepest core of my nastiest
Realm of red flames of fire wanting to consume you in my all making you
My only obsession not because I gave it up but you dare to take it like
The woman you are, the whore I deserve and the Goddess I demand
To make me scream her name like a raging wildfire begging to be drenched
In your soaking wet ocean waves of juices I thirst for with my face buried
Deep locking my tongue on your swollen erect clit sucking you like a mad man
Hungry for every drop begging to lick your sweet sensual lips laced with my cream!
Are you down to cum in every imaginable way to your ultimate orgasm?
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Re: Re. Are you down?
7th Jan 2017 12:28pm
Yes indeed. 😉 It's been a while love. Glad to see your return to the dungeon. 💋💋💋