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Wonderful Darkness
Bathed in darkness
Surrounded by moon light
to me
it will never touch
My world is black and red
above me wind howls
below me water growls
my tears run
but you'll never see me cry
Stareing down eternity alone
I will never be the same
leave me stranded here
in the darkness of night
facing down the light
Surrounded by moon light
to me
it will never touch
My world is black and red
above me wind howls
below me water growls
my tears run
but you'll never see me cry
Stareing down eternity alone
I will never be the same
leave me stranded here
in the darkness of night
facing down the light
Published 16th Nov 2016
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16th Nov 2016 4:28pm
17th Nov 2016 1:46am
18th Nov 2016 12:12pm
For some reason This gave me a bit of a flashback to my Junior year in high school, when my friends and I would go to the city and just sit on top of some of the tall buildings and stare at the city below.
I very much enjoyed reading this, and thank you for unintentionally taking me back to that.
I very much enjoyed reading this, and thank you for unintentionally taking me back to that.
18th Nov 2016 1:22pm
your welcome and ironically i was sitting ontop of my grandma's apartment building when i wrote this. LOL!
18th Nov 2016 1:33pm
I would've been on top of mine as well, but I don't need my neighbor complaining to the landlord again, haha.
It was wonderfully well-written. I look forward to more :)
It was wonderfully well-written. I look forward to more :)
18th Nov 2016 2:09pm
