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Nude, untitled
If only I were a foliole lost upon a nefarious chinook. My love weighs heavily and the wind cannot carry the burden of a feral heart. Lachrymose skies embrace my sadness like a wanton lover and the urgent drops of rain are my prurient tears. When the mistral whispers, I envy the kisses it lays upon your cheek while my tongue remains abandoned.
Much like you, wandering chevalier, the sky is too far to grasp and its beauty far beyond my reach, never to be held, never to be touched and only the moon shall be its lover, just as you shall only be mine. In all your darkness you expose yourself to the camouflage of night, bathing in my wetness and wearing my heart, your medal of scandal,tucked beneath your bandoleer.
I kiss you twice and love you all at once. I taste your tumescents on my lips and paint myself in nothing at all, no colors, no fabric. Take me naked, as you desire; I was made your woman. A soldier was not meant for tears, so I weep for both of us and stain our skin with our own spices.
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Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 2:35pm
it's exactly that, Kas, doesn't need a title,
we call it what it is,
but mostly
we just drift in the hard wet of it...
keeping it, sleeping with it...
we call it what it is,
but mostly
we just drift in the hard wet of it...
keeping it, sleeping with it...
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Re: Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 2:50pm
Nameless, John, a nameless drift in the hard wet of it, too vast for any title.
Such sweet words, thank you, for keeping them close...
Such sweet words, thank you, for keeping them close...
Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 2:38pm
Re: Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 7:42pm
I really enjoy the numerous amount of words that can be used for one, simple meaning and when you find just the right one, you know.
Thanks for reading...
Thanks for reading...
Re: Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 7:48pm
Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 4:24pm
Cheers my fellow sesquipedalian. I swear!! You and I are building our vocabulary from the same sources. Totally trips me out. I may have some useful insight. I may not fully understand which definition you intended with tumescent, but you're using tumescent as a noun. Tumescent(adj), as a noun, is spelled tumescence.
This line got me! Such saturnine beauty...When the mistral whispers, I envy the kisses it lays upon your cheek while my tongue remains abandoned.
Such raw, pure power here! I taste your tumescents on my lips and paint myself in nothing at all, no colors, no fabric. Take me naked, as you desire
Love it! Great work! :)
This line got me! Such saturnine beauty...When the mistral whispers, I envy the kisses it lays upon your cheek while my tongue remains abandoned.
Such raw, pure power here! I taste your tumescents on my lips and paint myself in nothing at all, no colors, no fabric. Take me naked, as you desire
Love it! Great work! :)
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Re: Re. Nude, untitled
And so the hunt for words continues, each one more interesting than the last. Sesquipedalian, for instance.
Thanks for the tip, and for the great feedback and comments.
Always appreciated...
Thanks for the tip, and for the great feedback and comments.
Always appreciated...
Re: Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 8:06pm
You're welcome. Sesquipedalian is a hard one. To spell, to pronounce. Definitely, takes a bit of practice.
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Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 4:40pm
Your work is always drenched with devotion... love that!
"Take me naked, as you desire; I was made your woman" > breathtakingly beautiful!
"Take me naked, as you desire; I was made your woman" > breathtakingly beautiful!
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Re: Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 8:02pm
Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 6:52pm
Kasai, you've created another heart wrenching beauty here. I imagine your soul to be rainbow iridescent with such words and emotions tucked away in you...
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 8:04pm
What a beautiful way of seeing a soul, sweet Willow, thank you for such a lovely comment...
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Anonymous
13th Nov 2016 7:20pm
i'm not sure which part of this enraptures me most,
honey you are a Goddess in Ink. leaving me always
so speechless.
Never can get enough
honey you are a Goddess in Ink. leaving me always
so speechless.
Never can get enough
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Re: Re. Nude, untitled
13th Nov 2016 8:09pm
Such a kind lady, I adore your comments.
You, speachless? I can't imagine you ever being truly, speachless with your always lovely comments.
Goddess in ink, such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you...
You, speachless? I can't imagine you ever being truly, speachless with your always lovely comments.
Goddess in ink, such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you...
Re. Nude, untitled
14th Nov 2016 11:14am
Loved every bit of this but my favorite was your ending stanza... That was purely brilliant!! :)
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Re: Re. Nude, untitled
14th Nov 2016 6:41pm
Such a great comment, and I'm so glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for taking the time...
Thanks for taking the time...
Re. Nude, untitled
19th Nov 2016 9:47pm
Re: Re. Nude, untitled
20th Nov 2016 1:50am
Oh my, speachless, you? What a wonderful compliment. I'm honored you came for a visit,
thank you...
thank you...