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My Muse
as i close my eyes
i feel your presence
your lips on my skin
your voice in my ear
demanding i come
you give me rest
when i lay my face
on your lyrical chest
safe in your arms
as i close my eyes
i can feel your palm
hitting away my pain
releasing my sorrow
reviving my senses
you give me peace
when you wrap your
hand around my neck
feeling your power
as i close my eyes
i can feel your prick
possessing my pussy
thrusting life into me
until iโm born anew
after all the players
You are a Prayer
โ
close
my eyes
and let you
Take me there...
i feel your presence
your lips on my skin
your voice in my ear
demanding i come
you give me rest
when i lay my face
on your lyrical chest
safe in your arms
as i close my eyes
i can feel your palm
hitting away my pain
releasing my sorrow
reviving my senses
you give me peace
when you wrap your
hand around my neck
feeling your power
as i close my eyes
i can feel your prick
possessing my pussy
thrusting life into me
until iโm born anew
after all the players
You are a Prayer
โ
close
my eyes
and let you
Take me there...
Author's Note
Madonna - Like A Prayer โ
https://youtu.be/IaHQYTm14Kc
https://youtu.be/IaHQYTm14Kc
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Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 3:23pm
"after all the players, you are a prayer" --BRILLIANT line
also love the stanza before that, especially "I can feel your prick" and "thrusting life into me" some gems of lines you got. great job.
also love the stanza before that, especially "I can feel your prick" and "thrusting life into me" some gems of lines you got. great job.
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Re: Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 3:33pm
Thank you so much for your comment!
That player - prayer line is really important to me, so calling that line brilliant means a lot to me! Thank you!
That player - prayer line is really important to me, so calling that line brilliant means a lot to me! Thank you!
Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 3:25pm
Sorry one more thing! I love the portrayal of this like dom/sub kinkiness as the one who is a prayer. So often we only hear about gentle love making as being saving but that's not the only way!!!
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Re: Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 3:36pm
No need to say sorry, you make me smile!
I'm so glad you picked up the dom/sub part in this and yes... gentle love making is definitely not the only way and most certainly not the best way ;-)
I'm so glad you picked up the dom/sub part in this and yes... gentle love making is definitely not the only way and most certainly not the best way ;-)
Re. My Muse
beautiful Duende you took me all the way there with this sexually heated write ;)
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 3:39pm
Thank you so much, dear Crim!
I'm really glad to hear I took you all the way there, because this poem means a lot to me!!!
I truly appreciate your comment!
I'm really glad to hear I took you all the way there, because this poem means a lot to me!!!
I truly appreciate your comment!
Re. My Muse
Anonymous
25th Oct 2016 3:38pm
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Re: Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 3:41pm
Wow... what an amazing and enthusiastic comment!
Thank you so much for your words, Adam!
Thank you so much for your words, Adam!
Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 5:16pm
I love this poem from you. Probably one of my favorites from you. You could do no wrong when it comes to poetry ๐
P.S. I forgot to say sexy as hell too!! Love the picture ๐
P.S. I forgot to say sexy as hell too!! Love the picture ๐
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Re: Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 7:12pm
I already had the idea you would love the picture :-)
Great to hear it's one of your favorites, that makes me smile big time!
Thank you so much for your comment, DC
Great to hear it's one of your favorites, that makes me smile big time!
Thank you so much for your comment, DC
Re. My Muse
Anonymous
25th Oct 2016 6:08pm
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Re: Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 7:14pm
Re. My Muse
Anonymous
25th Oct 2016 8:37pm
Great picture, even better poem. One of the best I have read. Thanks ๐

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Re: Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 4:30am
Thank you so much for your comment!
One of the best you've ever read?
Wow... that is an amazing compliment, can't ask for better :-)
One of the best you've ever read?
Wow... that is an amazing compliment, can't ask for better :-)
Re. My Muse
25th Oct 2016 11:59pm
Hey Duende.......you're Muse has inspired you very hotly........enjoyed this sexy ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 4:32am
Great to hear you enjoyed this one, flowergirl!
And yes... he is very inspiring ;-)
Thank you so much for your comment!
Love, Duende
And yes... he is very inspiring ;-)
Thank you so much for your comment!
Love, Duende
Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 00:15am
Sensually emotive...
Clearly a very lucky guy...
I'm sure he was/will be honored
to know he had that effect on you...
Clearly a very lucky guy...
I'm sure he was/will be honored
to know he had that effect on you...
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Re: Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 4:35am
Thanks so much for your comment, Poetik!
You make me blush by saying he's a very lucky guy :-)
You make me blush by saying he's a very lucky guy :-)
Re. My Muse
Anonymous
26th Oct 2016 1:57am
It never ceases to amaze me how much a woman can be ignited through trust and connectivity...the levels of exploration into all that is sensual and sexual can be an endless one depending the unspoken agreement. of the terms of engagement/endearment between the two... Yes.. This vibe definitely nudges the imagination Duende. .

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Re: Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 4:43am
That's a wonderful comment, Naajir!
People sometimes underestimate the power of words and yes.. trust and connectivity are the keys to make a write like this possible!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it nudges the imagination!
Thank you so much for your words and thoughts :-)
People sometimes underestimate the power of words and yes.. trust and connectivity are the keys to make a write like this possible!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it nudges the imagination!
Thank you so much for your words and thoughts :-)
Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 4:38am
So beautifully inspired,every poet needs a muse to bring it out of us, just the way it was meant to be.
Amazing poetry,Duende....
Amazing poetry,Duende....
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Re: Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 4:48am
Thank you so much for your comment, Kasai!
I'm glad you enjoyed this one and yes... a muse can bring out the best in us :-)
I really appreciate your words!
I'm glad you enjoyed this one and yes... a muse can bring out the best in us :-)
I really appreciate your words!
Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 7:07am
The imagery in this piece comes across. Very vivid and imaginative. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.
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Re: Re. My Muse
26th Oct 2016 9:03am
Thank you so much for your comment, Eswaller!
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this piece and its imagery :-)
I really appreciate your visits!
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this piece and its imagery :-)
I really appreciate your visits!
Re. My Muse
Anonymous
28th Oct 2016 12:38pm
Love this one. Such vivid expression.
Heated, and full of understandable pleasure ๐
You can feel the connection you have to your muse through your words.
Great ink.
Heated, and full of understandable pleasure ๐
You can feel the connection you have to your muse through your words.
Great ink.

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Re: Re. My Muse
28th Oct 2016 12:55pm
Thank you so much for your comment, lovely Heart โฅ
Great to hear you love this one and that you can feel the connection!
I so appreciate your words... always!!!
Love, Duende
Great to hear you love this one and that you can feel the connection!
I so appreciate your words... always!!!
Love, Duende
Re. My Muse
Anonymous
29th Oct 2016 4:14am
Well Dear Duende, I shall say you have read me enough to know why I would "extra" enjoy this lovely ink...the picture alone got me to sigh...stunning ink...
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo

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Re: Re. My Muse
29th Oct 2016 5:58am
Thank you so much for calling this stunning, Taryn!
I'm glad to hear you love this one and yes... I know why you enjoy this ink and the picture ;-)
Love, Duende
I'm glad to hear you love this one and yes... I know why you enjoy this ink and the picture ;-)
Love, Duende
Re. My Muse
8th Nov 2016 6:03pm
Re: Re. My Muse
8th Nov 2016 7:00pm
Thank you for your comment and for bringing a smile on my face :-)
I really appreciate your visit and words!
I really appreciate your visit and words!
Re. My Muse
Anonymous
11th Nov 2016 6:40pm
I will find one of these!
Love you are delicious
with your words
thank you for taking my
my mind off of cluttering
BS
Love you are delicious
with your words
thank you for taking my
my mind off of cluttering
BS

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Re: Re. My Muse
11th Nov 2016 6:55pm
Thank you so much, lovely one!
You make me blush with your comments :-)
One day you will find one... I'm sure!
You're such an amazing woman โฅ
You make me blush with your comments :-)
One day you will find one... I'm sure!
You're such an amazing woman โฅ
Re. My Muse
20th Nov 2016 7:22pm
Exquisite!! So in love with this remarkable ending!!
after all the players
You are a Prayer
โ
close
my eyes
and let you
Take me there...
after all the players
You are a Prayer
โ
close
my eyes
and let you
Take me there...
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Re: Re. My Muse
21st Nov 2016 2:46pm
You have a talent for picking out my favorite poems ;-)
Thank you for another amazing comment!
Thank you for another amazing comment!
Re: Re. My Muse
21st Nov 2016 11:09pm
I have a talent for picking out all your poems!! Lol! Nobodies work has enchanted me quite like yours.
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Re: Re. My Muse
"Nobodies work has enchanted me quite like yours" > that's the most amazing compliment you can give me! I can't ask for more!
Thank you so much... I really appreciate your comments, more than words can express!
Thank you so much... I really appreciate your comments, more than words can express!
Re: Re. My Muse
22nd Nov 2016 9:58pm
You're quite welcome. I'm so grateful to be here, and to be learning as much as I am.
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Re. My Muse
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2017 5:55am
The attentive kind of muse i'm looking for. You are something empowerfully sexy here doll.

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