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Darkness
Darkness roams in my heart
It fills the deepest most hidden parts of me
It scatters on the most shallow parts of me
Darkness makes me happy
Light is a lost part of my life
For I never had it
Light never shines in me
Light never shines on me
The deepest most dark parts of me shade it
There is no battle of dark and light in me
The darkness won the battle at my birth
I embrace darkness
I will forever be in the dark
The darkness is me and I am the darkness
I am one with the Dark
It fills the deepest most hidden parts of me
It scatters on the most shallow parts of me
Darkness makes me happy
Light is a lost part of my life
For I never had it
Light never shines in me
Light never shines on me
The deepest most dark parts of me shade it
There is no battle of dark and light in me
The darkness won the battle at my birth
I embrace darkness
I will forever be in the dark
The darkness is me and I am the darkness
I am one with the Dark
Published 19th Oct 2016
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21st Oct 2016 5:50pm
It might be more interesting to describe what is dark in you, than to keep using the word over and over-- mostly because the word is such a broad one.
30th Oct 2016 00:30am
Thank you for your input... I will perfect the skill of writing as time goes... it means a lot to me.
The thought throughout was stirring,that dark place we all have been to,some of us more than others. Your expressiveness is just amazing,however I agree with the previouse comment and find it very useful to hunt for words with similar meanings. It might inspire you to find new ways to express those thoughts.
Keep it up,poetry calls to you...
Keep it up,poetry calls to you...
30th Oct 2016 00:28am
Thank you for your input... I'll do better and better with the more pieces I write. I only recently just started writing. One Love!
30th Oct 2016 8:36am
We all impove our writing that way,even I still hunt for poetry,learning more and more as I go. You seem to have quite a knack for it...
