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Love is beautiful
I am in love with love as i always say
I believe even when people let me down
I know i will find my crazy or he will find me
As my tattoo says love is about Faith and Commitment
People fail in those two always
They lie they cheat because they are not committed
Then when they lose that special person they repent
But in most of the cases is to late
People don't have enough faith to believe in promise land
I do
People think that happiness is a myth
I don't. I think that we chose to be happy or sad
Life is difficult but we make it more difficult
I am happy most of the times
Why Why Why
because i was sad for too long
Now at my almost 40's my life just started
And i will live next to a fighter not a coward anymore
He is not yet here but he is soon to come
That i know.
Published 17th Oct 2016
| Edited 7th Feb 2017
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An expectant poem, the first four and last eight lines show a little of yourself that, I think, a right man would warm to if he read this.
18th Oct 2016 7:07am
The right man you are 100% accurate only him will get the message.
I hope he reads the poems in this site otherwise he will never find out.
Thanks for the read!
I hope he reads the poems in this site otherwise he will never find out.
Thanks for the read!
19th Oct 2016 6:10am
Further comment (rhyming):
Nice thing you mention your tattoo;
He might want to come for a view,
May get to find out where it is
When together doing love's biz.*
biz - business
Nice thing you mention your tattoo;
He might want to come for a view,
May get to find out where it is
When together doing love's biz.*
biz - business
19th Oct 2016 12:55pm
19th Oct 2016 9:58pm
