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The world is our stage
...and it gives what we give it,
the world is resistant,
the world is defiant,
the world is consistent ,
the world as nature intended
is a humbling experience,
and I am alive with its marquee upon my soul.
the world is resistant,
the world is defiant,
the world is consistent ,
the world as nature intended
is a humbling experience,
and I am alive with its marquee upon my soul.
Published 15th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2016 10:02am
I'm a proper sucker for these short insightful pieces. I love the way that the title flows into the actual poem. In terms of movement, this is beautifully done.
"the world is resistant,
the world is defiant,
the world is consistent" - I mulled over this for a while, wondering if consistency and resistance can be used in the same paragraph. At initial thought, they struck me as polar opposites... but in retrospect, you can be consistently resistant... and added into the imagery of the world being a stage, and ourselves merely actors, well that's rather special.
A lot packed into a small space here. Beautiful work.
Thank you for the read.
"the world is resistant,
the world is defiant,
the world is consistent" - I mulled over this for a while, wondering if consistency and resistance can be used in the same paragraph. At initial thought, they struck me as polar opposites... but in retrospect, you can be consistently resistant... and added into the imagery of the world being a stage, and ourselves merely actors, well that's rather special.
A lot packed into a small space here. Beautiful work.
Thank you for the read.
17th Oct 2016 7:34pm
15th Oct 2016 2:23pm
Missy didn't leave much to say! This is a gem write indeed Pisha!
and somewhere in the background of this stage..one KDAmB is doing a terrible job of playing is part!! ;-)
and somewhere in the background of this stage..one KDAmB is doing a terrible job of playing is part!! ;-)
15th Oct 2016 4:47pm
Consistently we continue on
Like a marquee light
Never off until the show is done
So true♡ I love your words Dear Heart♡
Like a marquee light
Never off until the show is done
So true♡ I love your words Dear Heart♡
16th Oct 2016 00:31am
17th Oct 2016 8:41am
