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Fours A Crowd
Now I’ve had the occasional threesome
But, I would love to see what this new experience could become
Since the planting of the seed, the night we all met
This encounter stemming from a playful bet
And the curiosity that we all share
Well…except for one of us, but I can’t say that I care
Hers….and mine
One takes the front, the other…behind
She watches from afar as they partake
In the love of lust and that’s all it takes
For her to become the ghost of climaxes past
Her jealousy is irrelevant…he's having a blast
It’s apparent that this will soon become a competition
My legs around her man’s neck is just one condition
Of the situation at hand
Receiving more than just attention from her man
Opening my mouth to take him in
He grabs my throat…I’ll be his most pleasurable sin
Compared to you…he’ll notice that I’m more experienced and dare I say energetic
He’ll succumb to my sweet nectar…diabetic
Doing things to him that you find incredible
After tonight I’ll remain unforgettable
Gradually putting you to shame
Because tonight your man is calling my name
When you touch him he’ll think of me
I’ve conquered his desire…consumed by his forbidden fantasy
He’s been lost in my wave since we kissed
We no longer need you sweetheart…excuse yourself…you’ve been dismissed
But, I would love to see what this new experience could become
Since the planting of the seed, the night we all met
This encounter stemming from a playful bet
And the curiosity that we all share
Well…except for one of us, but I can’t say that I care
Hers….and mine
One takes the front, the other…behind
She watches from afar as they partake
In the love of lust and that’s all it takes
For her to become the ghost of climaxes past
Her jealousy is irrelevant…he's having a blast
It’s apparent that this will soon become a competition
My legs around her man’s neck is just one condition
Of the situation at hand
Receiving more than just attention from her man
Opening my mouth to take him in
He grabs my throat…I’ll be his most pleasurable sin
Compared to you…he’ll notice that I’m more experienced and dare I say energetic
He’ll succumb to my sweet nectar…diabetic
Doing things to him that you find incredible
After tonight I’ll remain unforgettable
Gradually putting you to shame
Because tonight your man is calling my name
When you touch him he’ll think of me
I’ve conquered his desire…consumed by his forbidden fantasy
He’s been lost in my wave since we kissed
We no longer need you sweetheart…excuse yourself…you’ve been dismissed
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Re. Fours A Crowd
15th Oct 2016 00:55am
Wwwwwoooooowwwww....I honestly can't disagree that YOU could be the ultimate SIN... But damned if I'd care if I could that moment in time lol... Super heated concept n fantasy... Fuck the outcome lol
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15th Oct 2016 00:59am
Lol...the funny thing is...many men would continue as if their lady never left! What would you do in the middle of this situation if your lady decided to fade to the background...then flee the scene? You'd be surprised with the answers I've received. Lol thanks for the comment love!!! 💋👅💋
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15th Oct 2016 1:06am
In the heat of the moment, I'd KEEP tearing that ass up!! lol it sounds bad but truly, it's not like the scene wasn't discussed before the act, n if both are open to whatever, they just have to deal with whatever happens
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15th Oct 2016 1:12am
Ahhh!!! Lol...see what I mean! That is usually the answer. The wrong answer might I add lol. But its true if it's discussed then walking out just makes you look like you were all talk. Speaking for myself I'd show her up just because I know I can...💋
Re. Fours A Crowd
15th Oct 2016 00:59am
Oooooo.....scandalous babygirl. Sounds like my kind of party. Sprinkle just a little BDSM in the mix and let's see how you fare.
#onaquesttobeatdapussyup 😈
#onaquesttobeatdapussyup 😈
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Re: Re. Fours A Crowd
15th Oct 2016 1:05am
Now that sounds like my type of party!!! I can show you the 50 shades of Jenae....lol. You have an open invitation to come enjoy the dungeon....just fyi. 💋👅💋
Re. Fours A Crowd
15th Oct 2016 1:33am
....be careful of the monsters that you invite into your lair.......some are very addictive
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/56366-i-can-feel-it-coming/ I am a beast ㊗️
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/56366-i-can-feel-it-coming/ I am a beast ㊗️
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Re: Re. Fours A Crowd
15th Oct 2016 2:40am
YOU be careful...of the beast you will encounter in the lair...dnt threaten me with a good time!!! Lol
#beatitup
#beatitup
Re: Re. Fours A Crowd
15th Oct 2016 2:48am
No threat baby girl, just a pleasure able promise.....don't make me have to "sext" you a preview
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Lol you know I'm always open to you joining the fun. And you're right...there will be no mercy given. 💋👅💋😈😉😆
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Re: Re. Fours A Crowd
15th Oct 2016 9:54am
Well thank you my love...every now and then my alter ego sneaks through. She is the confident and somewhat sexually conceited side of me. And damn those rhyming schemes and rhythmic concepts!!! Lol I can't escape them no matter how hard I try. Thanks for the read dear...always an honor. 💋
Re. Fours A Crowd
16th Oct 2016 3:32am
Wow! haha.... this scenery was fire! I ain't mad atcha'..... keep the party goin...
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"Compared to you…he’ll notice that I’m more experienced and dare I say energetic
He’ll succumb to my sweet nectar…diabetic" <-- couldn't help but smile at these lines. They were so cleverly done. :)
HOT spill~
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"Compared to you…he’ll notice that I’m more experienced and dare I say energetic
He’ll succumb to my sweet nectar…diabetic" <-- couldn't help but smile at these lines. They were so cleverly done. :)
HOT spill~
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16th Oct 2016 3:51am
Lol...I am so glad that this ink could bring a smile to your face!!! This was a fun write for me...I haven't had the pleasure of enjoying this experience. However, I do my best to paint the picture...as much as possible when describing fantasy. Thanks for the Rain. 💋
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Re: Re. Fours A Crowd
16th Oct 2016 5:25pm
Heyyyy baby!!! I missed these sweet and sexy comments. 💋 I wanted to change my style up a bit...at least for these 2 writes. Lol you and Poetik with these wrong answers lol. It's cool though....hell I'm the same way! No point in being jealous, shit enjoy the moment! 💋👅💋👅💋👅👅👅💋 Thanks for the read love...
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Re. Fours A Crowd
18th Oct 2016 9:06pm
You must watch and learn from the experience so when it's time to participate add a twist to the erotic shit that will cause shock. That same shock which makes the anticipation of the sexual eruption much more sweeter.
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18th Oct 2016 9:34pm
I have to agree. Some men and women have one fear during situations like these.....being out done!!! If everyone thought the way we do...this fear would be non-existent. Thanks for the read love. 💋