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Wasted Love
I pour my love onto you
Hot with lust and want
Feeling flowing through me
Stains of passion my proof of devotion
But you reject me
A invisible barrier between us both
My love going to waste
Your scorn forever present
Nothing but rejection and a mess left of my affection
I guess a Hot Carl is not for you
Hot with lust and want
Feeling flowing through me
Stains of passion my proof of devotion
But you reject me
A invisible barrier between us both
My love going to waste
Your scorn forever present
Nothing but rejection and a mess left of my affection
I guess a Hot Carl is not for you
Published 1st Aug 2011
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the last two lines make this a parody (i hope). that's fairly creative despite what it appears at first glance. though, if it is meant to be a parody, the body's a bit subtle, i almost didn't catch it. [:
oh, and typos in L1 (pour) and L9 (Nothing) [:
oh, and typos in L1 (pour) and L9 (Nothing) [:
Thanks for pointing out the typos. I suck at grammar and writing this at 3 in the morning doesn't help that.
4th Aug 2011 6:31am
