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Absence of Mind...
As always,
the wind gusts
n' crisp autumn leaves
chase shadows
along guttered thought...
There's a comfort,
indescribable
when that cold
palm embeds itself
unto the gut
of loneliness's aura...
Chaffed, n' brittle,
spirits disembark
leavin' in it's wake...
dead, silent, screams
of a once, semi-cohesive
stirrin' of a stentorian presence...
the wind gusts
n' crisp autumn leaves
chase shadows
along guttered thought...
There's a comfort,
indescribable
when that cold
palm embeds itself
unto the gut
of loneliness's aura...
Chaffed, n' brittle,
spirits disembark
leavin' in it's wake...
dead, silent, screams
of a once, semi-cohesive
stirrin' of a stentorian presence...
Published 6th Oct 2016
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6th Oct 2016 12:12pm
I love the strength and message I perceive in the wind blowing through its layers.
Job well done!
JJ
Job well done!
JJ
6th Oct 2016 2:15pm
Thanks a bunch for your thoughtful words n your time... It's deeply appreciated :)
6th Oct 2016 3:15pm
I'm reading this over and over and feel like I'm walking along a path in a dormant forest with life hidden below the surfaces...I don't know if that's how you meant it, but that's where it took me. I love the winds... :)
7th Oct 2016 00:49am
Sweetie you're free to 'feel' this anyway you want... My intent is to just inspire n more people. How it moves n inspires I leave up to the individual :) thank u so much for ur heartfelt response :)
6th Oct 2016 3:59pm
I had to reread it a few times to let it sink in...
Dark, profound and comforting at the same time... an outstanding piece!
Dark, profound and comforting at the same time... an outstanding piece!
7th Oct 2016 00:51am
Thank you, sorry bout the darkness
BUT I've a tendency to visit that place... Appreciate the support always :)
BUT I've a tendency to visit that place... Appreciate the support always :)
7th Oct 2016 6:41am
6th Oct 2016 5:43pm
7th Oct 2016 00:53am
Aaaawwww...well I have a coat u can borrow if u need it :) thank you my sweet Crim :)
6th Oct 2016 7:11pm
"
There's a comfort,
indescribable
when that cold
palm embeds itself
unto the gut
of loneliness's aura... "
talk about twisting intestines
into a poetic knot
you don't go dark often
but man when you do..
you go IN!!
powerful excavating write
my bro
...
There's a comfort,
indescribable
when that cold
palm embeds itself
unto the gut
of loneliness's aura... "
talk about twisting intestines
into a poetic knot
you don't go dark often
but man when you do..
you go IN!!
powerful excavating write
my bro
...
7th Oct 2016 00:56am
Bro. I truly don't know I'd manage
sometimes, but luckily words like yours inspires me n drive me to keep on keepin on... Love n peace to u n urs kid. :)
sometimes, but luckily words like yours inspires me n drive me to keep on keepin on... Love n peace to u n urs kid. :)
6th Oct 2016 11:43pm
A beautiful and powerful poem of loss, loneliness and yet the strength of aloneness penetrates these words...
7th Oct 2016 00:57am
K I'm deeply honored for the RL add n truly appreciate the warmth of your heart n support always. :)
7th Oct 2016 9:02am
To be comforted by loneliness; I get a sense of acceptance from these words......
7th Oct 2016 10:08am
Sometimes you have to accept what you can't change... Thank you my sweetness, truly appreciate your support :)
Poe, it's been awhile since I've told you you're an helluva writer, so I'm saying it now... lol...
Your diversity in writing in all genres and creating in such an exceptional way, is remarkable.
Dope... with slight darkness ~
Your diversity in writing in all genres and creating in such an exceptional way, is remarkable.
Dope... with slight darkness ~
8th Oct 2016 6:10pm
It has been... But hey who's counting lol... Truly, I'm flattered n deeply grateful for ur support always :)
10th Oct 2016 00:22am
10th Oct 2016 00:29am
I've know of you for many many years
sweetie, and it's when you write like
this.. .which let's me know that
something is truly pulling parts of you.. .
Heart clutching release.. .
-Howlings
sweetie, and it's when you write like
this.. .which let's me know that
something is truly pulling parts of you.. .
Heart clutching release.. .
-Howlings
12th Oct 2016 2:43am
Aaaawwww... C'mere n let me kiss your sweet mouth... :) deeply grateful always :)
24th Oct 2016 5:01am
This is a beautifully written piece. I love all the layers and feelings behind this piece. You have such an interesting voice and point of view. Thanks for sharing this.
26th Oct 2016 00:17am
26th Oct 2016 00:03am
Wow Poet.......I could feel the wind change and chill my soul as I read thru this......you're talent in this one is outstanding......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Oct 2016 00:20am
I got a snuggie u could borrow
just as long as u promise not to
throw it away lol... Thank u my sweetheart, I'm grateful as always for your support :)
just as long as u promise not to
throw it away lol... Thank u my sweetheart, I'm grateful as always for your support :)
26th Oct 2016 3:05pm
Incredible, brought tears to my eyes. I'm a very lonely person by nature, and I felt my heart beating in tune as one with these luscious words.
26th Oct 2016 3:13pm
Aaaawww... Such sweet comment n lonely? U don't have to be or feel that way you know... ;). Oh n Thank u so much for the support :)
13th Feb 2017 11:18am
13th Feb 2017 12:45pm
Aaaawwww you're too sweet! Thank you so much, I'm very grateful for your thoughts n support :)
