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we lived
we lived like we had every moment to spare,
daring to forget that it would be over soon,
and yet we lived fully, filling every moment with all we had.
and when i miss you i regret nothing cause
i know i loved you fully.
and now we out there God-sent to fulfill dreams bigger than our worlds
and to shine brighter than our stars.
daring to forget that it would be over soon,
and yet we lived fully, filling every moment with all we had.
and when i miss you i regret nothing cause
i know i loved you fully.
and now we out there God-sent to fulfill dreams bigger than our worlds
and to shine brighter than our stars.
Published 22nd Sep 2016
| Edited 23rd Sep 2016
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22nd Sep 2016 2:03am
this is beautiful... when hearing/listening to this it wouldn't be a problem at all to admire how beautiful it is..just if you may adjust the structure so that the readers can also appreciate the true beauty of this gem!
23rd Sep 2016 8:23am
24th Sep 2016 00:06am
7th Dec 2016 1:02am
" we lived fully, filling every moment we had"
That is profound
Loss is painful
And a normal part of life
To be able to have no regrets is a rare and wonderful thing
That is profound
Loss is painful
And a normal part of life
To be able to have no regrets is a rare and wonderful thing
