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The Rain Slowly Cries
The rain it pitter patters
Against my window splatters
And the only thing that really matters
Is your not here with me
It's like the sky could see
And started crying so soft and slowly
Against my window splatters
And the only thing that really matters
Is your not here with me
It's like the sky could see
And started crying so soft and slowly
Published 12th Sep 2016
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12th Sep 2016 5:18am
A sadness and longing I know all too well. You have conveyed the rain perfectly... jj
12th Sep 2016 10:54pm
Thank you very much, it was defiantly was written with a longing that can never come true again.
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12th Sep 2016 7:17am
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12th Sep 2016 10:57pm
Thank you Warrior. I find sometimes simple is the best way to convey my view of life.
