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play the game
Smile nod agree
Clap you're hands and let everyone be
The futures bright when you start to see
Happiness comes so easily
Take away the negativity and see what remains
Life's a gift so play the game
thinking of yesterday will drive you insane
Control you're thoughts control you're brain
Love everyday like it's you're last
Love you're life forget the past
What's done I'd done the stones are cast
Look to tomorrow and just have a blast
Clap you're hands and let everyone be
The futures bright when you start to see
Happiness comes so easily
Take away the negativity and see what remains
Life's a gift so play the game
thinking of yesterday will drive you insane
Control you're thoughts control you're brain
Love everyday like it's you're last
Love you're life forget the past
What's done I'd done the stones are cast
Look to tomorrow and just have a blast
Published 7th Sep 2016
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7th Sep 2016 11:06pm
In all honesty Bro..this is a collection of poems..like a bouquet 💐 of lovely flowers.. Why? I read it many times, and stopped after each line, and felt that each line encapsulated a poem,a summary of experience. Abd that, was about the subject. I am a fan of rhyme and rhythm and loved it how you delivered this one with such smooth flow! Thanks bro for this gem.. will hang it on my reading list!
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KDAmB
8th Sep 2016 6:13am
Ure comments always mean the world to me and it's something else having such positive things said about my poems I can't thank u enough
11th Sep 2016 6:45pm
Such a profound piece!
"Control you're thoughts" > most people underestimate the power of thoughts, so it's great to find that message wrapped in a poem :-)
"Control you're thoughts" > most people underestimate the power of thoughts, so it's great to find that message wrapped in a poem :-)
11th Sep 2016 11:35pm
Thanks for a great comment and thanks for checking out my stuff really appreciate it
