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Understanding the Albatross
The Storm...
always on the horizon for someone;
the breaking wave, the wake………
the beautiful drenching rain,
good apothecary is the Albatross,
and a nice feeling that its already gone;
the feeling of that calm…………………
the smell of it
then setting your sails, and so sailing on.
Understanding...
The Albatross is the most beautiful sight
for a sailor, and for me a writer
the most confusing and difficult bridge I crossed…
Published 6th Sep 2016
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6th Sep 2016 10:51pm
7th Sep 2016 6:29am
6th Sep 2016 11:06pm
eye can re'late.....SCTaylor caught it best though.........
fine
rite
fine
rite
7th Sep 2016 6:26am
One of the best... :) thank you
I told you about the line from the Rime
that I found right in the middle of...that book of 50 shades.
Very popular this albatross.
a long time ago my sister in-law was 26 and bedridden,
I would sit and read to her from Moby Dick
when she was up to it, she was pretty sick
She loved Herman Melville.
I remember falling in love :D
It was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read
(I bowed myself before the angels)
the albatross...twas magnificent....
I told you about the line from the Rime
that I found right in the middle of...that book of 50 shades.
Very popular this albatross.
a long time ago my sister in-law was 26 and bedridden,
I would sit and read to her from Moby Dick
when she was up to it, she was pretty sick
She loved Herman Melville.
I remember falling in love :D
It was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read
(I bowed myself before the angels)
the albatross...twas magnificent....
7th Sep 2016 6:07am
7th Sep 2016 6:29am
7th Sep 2016 6:21am
Nice imagery, well done, if you like to hear the image, One suggests "Albatross" by Peter Greens Fleetwood Mac.
7th Sep 2016 3:06pm
