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Words
Words are to a poet what candy is to a child
temptingly sweet, they call to you
melting slowly on the tongue,
meant to be savored
ever so tempting
even when you try to abstain
they find you
waiting to be unwrapped
tasted, discovered,
until you find yourself once again indulging.
temptingly sweet, they call to you
melting slowly on the tongue,
meant to be savored
ever so tempting
even when you try to abstain
they find you
waiting to be unwrapped
tasted, discovered,
until you find yourself once again indulging.
Published 31st Aug 2016
| Edited 1st Sep 2016
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1st Sep 2016 2:29am
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1st Sep 2016 11:29am
:)
I agree that it does sound better without the "so" Thank you and thanks for your comments.
I agree that it does sound better without the "so" Thank you and thanks for your comments.
20th Sep 2016 3:55am
Gorgeous! I love the taste of Your words on MY tongue. Glad You dropped the "so," as rhythmically, it seemed not to work.
