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Cowardly
A mental block
A lack of words,
I see you and I'm breathless.
Just not in the way you'd hope
You cut out my tongue with the knife you brought that night,
And you took my courage to breathe.
A lack of words,
I see you and I'm breathless.
Just not in the way you'd hope
You cut out my tongue with the knife you brought that night,
And you took my courage to breathe.
Published 31st Aug 2016
| Edited 1st Sep 2016
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Short sharp penetrating writing
Condensed punchy spot on
This builds up at the beginning leading up to a point then the twist that brings a surprise ending
The plan was executed perfectly to hit with the element of surprise attack
Condensed punchy spot on
This builds up at the beginning leading up to a point then the twist that brings a surprise ending
The plan was executed perfectly to hit with the element of surprise attack
