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How many?
One mince pie
two mince pies
three mince pies
four mince pies
five mince pies
six mince pies
seven mince pies
One starving child
two...
Published 30th Nov 2009
| Edited 28th Mar 2016
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Anonymous
30th Nov 2009 2:10pm
hurts.cant bring myself to say anything more.
30th Nov 2009 4:53pm
Just a reminder -the pies are on special offer- as we embark on our annual bloated Tsunami of self indulgence that we deserve to choke on them.
Anonymous
30th Nov 2009 5:24pm
,i was amazed at the simple force of this one, it really hurt.
Anonymous
30th Nov 2009 7:43pm
Seemed unvarnished at first, but on second analysis the meaning really hit home. Brilliant work.
30th Nov 2009 8:11pm
1st Dec 2009 2:57am
What fascinates me is how you don't always need lots of words to get a message across.
Thanks for your feedback, Melp
Thanks for your feedback, Melp
1st Dec 2009 9:21pm
