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Eyes Nailed Shut
Tattered and torn, a crown of bloody thorns, who these days would get nailed for our sins?.
Terrioism, Feminism, Catholicism,all sound different ,but are they the same within.
Do you count your carbon credits the same as you count your blessings?,
and is the Bible just another best seller and we just say, yea read it.
So the congregation sings God is Great, God is Good, The Minister says now my people , bow your heads in respect, prey hard my pretties, the church needs a new lear jet.
Terrioism, Feminism, Catholicism,all sound different ,but are they the same within.
Do you count your carbon credits the same as you count your blessings?,
and is the Bible just another best seller and we just say, yea read it.
So the congregation sings God is Great, God is Good, The Minister says now my people , bow your heads in respect, prey hard my pretties, the church needs a new lear jet.
Published 30th Nov 2009
| Edited 18th Jul 2016
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Anonymous
30th Nov 2009 11:20am
i like the spirit in this , but how can you club feminism along with terrorism n catholicism?
1st Dec 2009 3:20am
ell, i may need a big shovel to dig myself out if this one lol, how about they are all isms? i was really meaning the actual cause is normally just , its just that some organisations have the best intentions but sometimes its members or an element within that organisation dont. Ross
Anonymous
1st Dec 2009 12:24pm
I hope u are safely out of the hole now, i was a tad miffed at feminism glued to terrorism,n catholicism. True enough they all are isms, and its also true that the original intent gets adulterated somwhere in practice.But u see as a woman, as a third world native, i know what it means to be treated as an inferior being.All avenues of life teaches u that everyday, in buses, trains, at work,home, everywhere.And u cant easily brush aside writings of Alice Walker, Arundati Roy and Toni Morrison as feminist propaganda , can u?
As far as I see it any ism that turns a blind eye to human suffering is propaganda!Pls excuse my rudeness.
As far as I see it any ism that turns a blind eye to human suffering is propaganda!Pls excuse my rudeness.
1st Dec 2009 9:42pm
hmm, true and sorry for any disrespect, i am pleased this has given rise to discussion, i am prone to sometimes`write what falls out of my head,
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2009 2:24am
O, there is no need to say sorry Ross, Pls dont do that.we are all friends here in some way,look forward to ur writing,n i will remember to hold my tongue:-)
2nd Dec 2009 2:58am
ok, then please do not hold your tongue either lol, thankyou , this is the first time i have put my writing out there so its an interesting time. Ross
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2009 10:58am
lol,will watch out your next one.
2nd Dec 2009 7:33pm
