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Amaranthine Love
This love is amaranthine,
A man with a plan in...
Motion unstoppable,
Commotion doubled.
This love is aesthetic
Say yes let it.
Open the heart,
It’s hard, but let down your guard,
Allow it to heal your scars.
This love is magic,
Have it heal the tragic,
Pain of your past, traumatic.
Take the risk, you won’t regret this.
A man with a plan in...
Motion unstoppable,
Commotion doubled.
This love is aesthetic
Say yes let it.
Open the heart,
It’s hard, but let down your guard,
Allow it to heal your scars.
This love is magic,
Have it heal the tragic,
Pain of your past, traumatic.
Take the risk, you won’t regret this.
Published 14th Aug 2016
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16th Aug 2016 3:47am
knew I would enjoy this when I saw the word amaranthine in the title..Beautiful Heartfelt lines!!! Bravo
16th Aug 2016 3:49am
Dictionary.com, feeds me steady updates of words that aren't a part of my lexicon. When i read that one, it inspired me. So, i immediately wrote a poem using it. :p It's great! Thanks for reading!
16th Aug 2016 5:14am
niiiiiiice...
This love is aesthetic. ..
That's some smooth izm right there. .
You spittin some tight game
Right here!
This love is aesthetic. ..
That's some smooth izm right there. .
You spittin some tight game
Right here!
16th Aug 2016 5:17am
Thanks!! Amaranthine and Aesthetic are such great words!! Appreciate the feedback!!
17th Aug 2016 3:52am
So beautiful, so felt..
sometimes we need
exactly this our rock
to prop upon and the
same should be
given back.
-Howlings
sometimes we need
exactly this our rock
to prop upon and the
same should be
given back.
-Howlings
17th Aug 2016 11:29am
That word ‘amaranthine' is captivating. Much like the sentiments contained with your scribbles. Welcome to DUP !
17th Aug 2016 12:22pm
I'm seeing that. This one seems to be popular here, but it's an old one, and each time i open it, i'm reminded of how much I've learned since i wrote it. Thanks for the feedback! Very much appreciated!
18th Aug 2016 00:18am
"Open the heart,
It’s hard, but let down your guard,
Allow it to heal your scars"
I love these lines. I'm a true believer that love heals all wounds. Great write love. 💋💋💋
It’s hard, but let down your guard,
Allow it to heal your scars"
I love these lines. I'm a true believer that love heals all wounds. Great write love. 💋💋💋
18th Aug 2016 00:20am
I'm a true believer as well. There are similar lines in my latest one too. I used the word, "amaranthine" again. Love it. Such a pretty word! Your feedback means the world to me! Many thanks LT!
