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amber notions
toddler's shorts
stuck up on a branch
swaying gently in the
suddenly chilling
afternoon air
a flag of
claimed territory
dyed princess pink
but still
signalling surrender
and defeat
of innocence
Published 4th Aug 2016
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4th Aug 2016 8:42am
we immediately connect the title to the poem,
it conjures horrible scenarios.
fascinating...
it conjures horrible scenarios.
fascinating...
5th Aug 2016 00:58am
Said scenarios are what immediately comes to mind when I see things like this *nods*
4th Aug 2016 5:00pm
5th Aug 2016 00:58am
9th Aug 2016 9:57am
That image n these words birth thoughts of wanting to confront
the animal who violated this poor lil innocent n 'claim' his ass with my fists! :(
the animal who violated this poor lil innocent n 'claim' his ass with my fists! :(
11th Aug 2016 1:00am
I'm glad my writing, and the picture I took and based the writing on, was able to stir such a visceral emotional reaction, Poetikmind
14th Dec 2016 00:06am
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