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The Rock
like a rock he stood in front of her
determined and strong minded
his body a true masterpiece
a statue of divine creation
afe arms that longed to hold her
dark eyes that pierced her soul
making her feel weak inside
and wet between her legs
he showed her what it feels like
to be a woman in all her glory
pressing her firmly against
the walls of his empire
his primal being showed no mercy
as he took her hard and rough
devouring every inch of her
fucking her back to life
he was like every man should be
a beacon in the darkest night
forever she will cherish him
as the rock in her tornado
determined and strong minded
his body a true masterpiece
a statue of divine creation
afe arms that longed to hold her
dark eyes that pierced her soul
making her feel weak inside
and wet between her legs
he showed her what it feels like
to be a woman in all her glory
pressing her firmly against
the walls of his empire
his primal being showed no mercy
as he took her hard and rough
devouring every inch of her
fucking her back to life
he was like every man should be
a beacon in the darkest night
forever she will cherish him
as the rock in her tornado
Published 3rd Aug 2016
| Edited 3rd Dec 2024
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Big Bad Handsome Man.
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Aug 2016 6:05pm
3rd Aug 2016 5:54pm
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4th Aug 2016 8:29am
Grazie mille, Elario!!!
Glad you enjoyed it and of course you like the quote... you're Italian ;-)
Glad you enjoyed it and of course you like the quote... you're Italian ;-)
3rd Aug 2016 7:45pm
Oh, this was delish!
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"He showed her what it feels like
to be a woman in all her glory
Pressing her firmly against
the walls of his empire" <-- so sexy! 'wall of his empire' just rolls off the imagination's tongue.
"His primal being showed no mercy
as he took her hard and rough
Devouring every inch of her
fucking her back to life" <-- being resuscitated like this is a good thang', yes?!
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"He showed her what it feels like
to be a woman in all her glory
Pressing her firmly against
the walls of his empire" <-- so sexy! 'wall of his empire' just rolls off the imagination's tongue.
"His primal being showed no mercy
as he took her hard and rough
Devouring every inch of her
fucking her back to life" <-- being resuscitated like this is a good thang', yes?!
4th Aug 2016 8:32am
Wow... what a wonderful comment, thanks! ♥
And yes, it was a good thing... a very very good thing ;-)
And yes, it was a good thing... a very very good thing ;-)
Anonymous
26th Aug 2016 3:32am
This idea is really evocative:
Pressing her firmly against
the walls of his empire
Those walls are open to interpretation, which keeps things interesting.
Pressing her firmly against
the walls of his empire
Those walls are open to interpretation, which keeps things interesting.
26th Aug 2016 6:32pm
Anonymous
26th Aug 2016 8:57pm
It's interesting when someone reads your words in ways you hadn't thought about, isn't it? :-)
26th Aug 2016 9:02pm
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Apr 2017 5:38am
24th Apr 2017 5:36am
WOMAN! have mercy, have mercy i felt my knees grows weaker and weaker by the moment,
then i became, then i became...this was the perfect early morning to read, with stars still shining
so daring sexy, i love you beauty!
then i became, then i became...this was the perfect early morning to read, with stars still shining
so daring sexy, i love you beauty!
24th Apr 2017 6:09am
Darling, you have no idea how many smiles you brought by commenting on this piece!
I can tell you that my knees have never been weaker; he was the most gorgeous creature I've ever seen, much younger than me, but he made me feel like a Goddess (something no man has ever done before)
Thank you so much... love you too!
I can tell you that my knees have never been weaker; he was the most gorgeous creature I've ever seen, much younger than me, but he made me feel like a Goddess (something no man has ever done before)
Thank you so much... love you too!
6th Sep 2018 00:05am
I’m jealous of this dude. I mean, aside from the obvious, you describe him as everything is mortal so-called-mem wish we could be. No wonder he’s your fantasy *sigh*
And as such, you describe him - and what he does to the proverbial *you* - beautifully, and quite efficiently I might add; this one was fairly short but it didn’t need to be any longer, it felt perfect.
And as such, you describe him - and what he does to the proverbial *you* - beautifully, and quite efficiently I might add; this one was fairly short but it didn’t need to be any longer, it felt perfect.
6th Sep 2018 5:36am
Oh yes, he was everything I could wish for... an animalistic alpha male. Sometimes that's all you need... thanks heaps for another comment!
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
20th Apr 2019 6:55pm
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21st Apr 2019 9:17am
That's such an amazing thing to say! Never thought about that and never heard it before it. Thank you for letting me know... will work my way throught the rest of your comments :-)
