7 Deadly Desires

"Justify me
with your twisted mind
show me the beast inside
possessing every inch of me
drag me through your darkness
and drown me in your perversion"

this is a hell of a wickedly fantastic erotic ;)

love Crim

Thank you, Crim!

You've made my day :-)

Love, Duende

This is so hauntingly beautiful
My thoughts are indescribable
As to what this evokes...
Truly a mesmerizing piece of art...
And the ending put a bow that entwined every verse before it so perfectly. ..

Truly a pleasure to read

Wow... you leave me a bit speechless with your message...

Thank you! This poem means a lot to me and so do your words!!!

Duende!!!! I love it!!!
You know you can pull 7 more delicious poem out of each one!!
BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!

You make me smile big time with your enthusiasm!

Thank you so much for loving this one and including it in your reading list!
Great idea to pull some poems out of this one... thanks :-)

Damn... this is awesome. You are something else Duende ^^

Thank you for calling this awesome, that means a lot to me!

Dare to be different is one of my mottos ;-)

Now see, if you simply extricate these parts alone, my poem makes perfect sense:

Terrify me
with your devil eyes
bury my soul in your soil
burn my heart in your hell
cut me open with your knife
paint your body with my blood  (the transformation)

Justify me
with your twisted mind
show me the beast inside .....drown me in your perversion (the exposition)

Modify me
with your magical hands
tear me apart and dismantle me ........laid bare for you to unravel and recreate me (the transferance)

Satisfy me
with your glorious body .......use me, own me and shatter me
ravage me (Correspondence, concordance)  this encompasses the first 4 stanzas of "Beautiful"

Mystify me
with your eloquent words
rip me apart and make me yours
fuck me, devour me and enchant me
with your tongue, your hands and your cock
but more so with words from your deviant mind  (the "roughness" of the road less traveled; perhaps I am the enigma)

Glorify me
with your loving heart
crucify me and caress me
torture me and treasure me.........(juxtaposing "trying to keep all my emotions at bay
the power.......giving cause to pleasures, spreading thy wings and embarking upon the journey)

Purify me
with your angel eyes
see me, free me and heal me............(the burning of kindred souls) revealing
the girl who has been hiding for far too long  (her redemption's song)

my logical connection to your words, your feelings : )

Thank you so much for your explanation, I know understand the connection (and even own my poem) better!    
   
my logical connection to your words, your feelings > that's why we need men... you are the ratio in our emotion...    
   
To highlight a few of your comments:    
   
paint your body with my blood  (the transformation) > ah, transformation... that makes perfect sense!    
   
juxtaposing "trying to keep all my emotions at bay" > now you've put that next to "torture me and treasure me" it has a whole new meaning... beautiful!    
   
revealing the girl who has been hiding for far too long  (her redemption's song) > I've written a redemption poem, maybe one day I'll post it...

Bumped into this by complete accident. You really are the most delicious writer. It rare for me to be moved these days, but moved I was. If the Manics had been an all girl band, they would have written this....

If you as a music expert/addict think this could have been written by the Manics, I must have done something good :-) It's one of the first poems I wrote and in all honesty I'm not that fond of it anymore (thought about a rewrite) but I'm glad it moved you!

Thank you so much for your comment... means a lot <3

Absolutely love the structure on this, lends a great cadance to the sexual build up. Your powers of wordplay and foreplay are on full display here, Dirty Duende

Thank you Taurus, glad you loved it.

We really love this one, you really broke this down with the naughtiness. Tight

Smiles, you found an older write. Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, Me.