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Mirror mirror Jacks triolet challenge
Mirror mirror tell them all
You're not impressed, but I can careless
how my hair tends to frizz up in a ball
Mirror mirror tell them all
When I look into you I see so many warts and all
But its ok, I like me and I know best
Mirror mirror tell them all
You're not impressed, but I can careless
You're not impressed, but I can careless
how my hair tends to frizz up in a ball
Mirror mirror tell them all
When I look into you I see so many warts and all
But its ok, I like me and I know best
Mirror mirror tell them all
You're not impressed, but I can careless
Published 21st Jul 2011
| Edited 22nd Jul 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Jul 2011 5:34am
21st Jul 2011 5:33am
I think the eighth line was supposed to be the same as the second line. :)
Love your attempt though. Very cute. Hehe...
Love your attempt though. Very cute. Hehe...
21st Jul 2011 5:38am
Anonymous
21st Jul 2011 6:31am
Goddamn you're so cute. ^_^
