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House of Pain
Poison boils hot
Beneath the black
Rotting flesh of
Your disease
Vile filth taints
My broken soul
Brings me retching
to my knees
I drop my head
prey for the demons
That sleep behind
Familiar eyes
Wounds run deep
They bleed shades
of tormented wrath
And weep fallen lies
Madness,my love
As red fades to
black and sun
Cannot give spark
Rusted wrought iron
Cages my mind
The foul taste of metal
Butchers my heart
Beneath the black
Rotting flesh of
Your disease
Vile filth taints
My broken soul
Brings me retching
to my knees
I drop my head
prey for the demons
That sleep behind
Familiar eyes
Wounds run deep
They bleed shades
of tormented wrath
And weep fallen lies
Madness,my love
As red fades to
black and sun
Cannot give spark
Rusted wrought iron
Cages my mind
The foul taste of metal
Butchers my heart
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Re. House of Pain
17th Jul 2016 5:24am
Re. House of Pain
17th Jul 2016 5:36am
stark & agonizing verses;
you're a woman of fire & it blazes in your poetry...
you're a woman of fire & it blazes in your poetry...
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Re. House of Pain
17th Jul 2016 5:41am
Re. House of Pain
17th Jul 2016 1:43pm
Re. House of Pain
19th Jul 2016 6:45am
'Tis an amazing write Kasai...in particular the last stanza is excellent....
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19th Jul 2016 7:01am
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19th Jul 2016 6:50am
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19th Jul 2016 7:02am
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19th Jul 2016 7:13am
Finding something beautiful in dark imagery, or unconventional imagery is where you find the truth...
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Re. House of Pain
27th Jul 2016 4:42pm
Yeah, I know the smell, taste, and look of
a butchered heart. I have one too.
Gave me the hebejibe's, you are too
good love, gosh
-Howlings
a butchered heart. I have one too.
Gave me the hebejibe's, you are too
good love, gosh
-Howlings
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Re. House of Pain
28th Jul 2016 6:05am
Re. House of Pain
18th Aug 2016 3:51am
Dark, dastardly, dirty...but delightfully resonating in the darkest deepest depth of my soul! Very fine ink!!
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Re. House of Pain
18th Aug 2016 5:22am
Re. House of Pain
Anonymous
12th Oct 2017 4:54am
Great poems it reminds me of Blight town from the game Dark Souls.
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15th Oct 2017 3:18am
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2017 3:20am
Hell yeah its a complement Dark souls is a awesome game .
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