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Shopping mall

Lets explore strange
a neutral strange
yet true to its form strange

walking in a mall
with 80% of the shops rendered useless
20% being useful
...a choice could not be made

walking through the stores
walking through aisles of shit
walking through aisles of expensive shit
walking and walking
entering and leaving

The perfect summary of an imperfect life
seeking something
seeking what?
exploring a vast area
leaving no solution

Merely a distraction
a distraction enabling laughter
from a strange situation
no answer could be found

Perhaps the answer is not found
but withdrawn...
knowing the effects of a real answer
shall overpower disappointment

Where's the guide?
if any come at all
Help... here's my call

That stupid shopping mall
a place of torment
leading to my mental downfall
Written by highwaytohell (Greg)
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