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thanks, mate...
watched the old guy on
the train struggle to open a packet
of sandwiches
and offered to give him
a hand which he gratefully
ate...
Published 5th Jul 2016
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5th Jul 2016 1:55am
5th Jul 2016 1:59am
Anonymous
5th Jul 2016 3:18am
It's good, it's witty.
5th Jul 2016 4:03pm
Anonymous
5th Jul 2016 5:58pm
It could be...
5th Jul 2016 5:16am
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5th Jul 2016 4:07pm
5th Jul 2016 9:32pm
These glimpses bring us much joy
to read, but they also impart a
realization of wisdom to write as such.
to read, but they also impart a
realization of wisdom to write as such.
6th Jul 2016 00:00am
that's very good of you, my friend... :)
I think "glimpses" is a good summation,
since I liken this stuff to a passing glance
which leaves - on myself, anyway - a
lasting impression...
I think "glimpses" is a good summation,
since I liken this stuff to a passing glance
which leaves - on myself, anyway - a
lasting impression...
6th Jul 2016 1:30am
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