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End it or else ...........
I know you are out there somewhere
stealing what is mine, my life, my loving,
You are every cliché in the goddamn book,
the thief in the night except when you
sneak off to fuck away his mornings.
Did you think I wouldn't even notice
that he is too tired now for my share
Well open your legs for the last time
honey, for make no mistake about it,
I don't share
I will take back what is mine.
And you, yes you
will be very, very sorry .....
stealing what is mine, my life, my loving,
You are every cliché in the goddamn book,
the thief in the night except when you
sneak off to fuck away his mornings.
Did you think I wouldn't even notice
that he is too tired now for my share
Well open your legs for the last time
honey, for make no mistake about it,
I don't share
I will take back what is mine.
And you, yes you
will be very, very sorry .....
Published 2nd Jul 2016
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2016 8:07pm
I suggest changing Line 5 to
"the thief in the night except when you
steal your way in to fuck away his mornings."
or something like that so you aren't using "away" twice..
"the thief in the night except when you
steal your way in to fuck away his mornings."
or something like that so you aren't using "away" twice..
2nd Jul 2016 8:53pm
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2016 1:01am
It's right next to the Paypal button. I get $5 per critique. $10 if you are a Noob.
3rd Jul 2016 3:07am
Lol I better make it worth you while then ........ oops that reads so wrong somehow!
