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Cold Hearted
The memories come back to me
as you lay bleeding on the floor
And I enjoy your pathetic pleas
Ive never been this satisfied before
As I cradle your life in my hands
Oh I wanted you to feel my pain
I could make this last forever
But it'll still never be the same
And you won't be needing this
because He can't help you anymore
I'm God now, I control your fate
It's not there, salvation you're pleading for
And I'll gut you with your cross
Just like the sheep you are
Don't pray for help, He isn't there
Shut the fuck up, death isn't far
Finally you drown in your blood
This is my favorite part!
You can die alone, I'm leaving you
As the cold-hearted bitch you are
as you lay bleeding on the floor
And I enjoy your pathetic pleas
Ive never been this satisfied before
As I cradle your life in my hands
Oh I wanted you to feel my pain
I could make this last forever
But it'll still never be the same
And you won't be needing this
because He can't help you anymore
I'm God now, I control your fate
It's not there, salvation you're pleading for
And I'll gut you with your cross
Just like the sheep you are
Don't pray for help, He isn't there
Shut the fuck up, death isn't far
Finally you drown in your blood
This is my favorite part!
You can die alone, I'm leaving you
As the cold-hearted bitch you are
Published 19th Jul 2011
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21st Jul 2011 5:44am
i beleive you are a truly gifted poet well done. it tells a story and keeps me hanging.
Anonymous
21st Jul 2011 9:18am
Sense a loss of control, or a want for control, in this piece. There's certainly a depth to it that is more than meets the eye. Well done. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme as well. ^_^
