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Begone My Unfaithful Maiden
bring me my bloody bride
so i can feast upon her suicide
when pain and fear keep me alive
her crimson wine shall make me thrive
beauty and lust have sealed her fate
gruesome showers made her my mate
until she refuses to annihilate
her pity eyes have fueled my hate
a fucking maggot nothing more
crawling through my veins
drenching red all over the floor
always draining from my core
a parasitic love, a reflective fate
alas my dear your death is near
into your eyes i see no fear
shadows slither thru my vision
grinning blindly at the tension
winding chains of fate betray
pinning down the hate to stay
love my addiction, hate this affliction
a fucking maggot nothing more
crawling through my veins
drenching red all over the floor
always draining from my core
breathe your final words of life
so i can feast upon her suicide
when pain and fear keep me alive
her crimson wine shall make me thrive
beauty and lust have sealed her fate
gruesome showers made her my mate
until she refuses to annihilate
her pity eyes have fueled my hate
a fucking maggot nothing more
crawling through my veins
drenching red all over the floor
always draining from my core
a parasitic love, a reflective fate
alas my dear your death is near
into your eyes i see no fear
shadows slither thru my vision
grinning blindly at the tension
winding chains of fate betray
pinning down the hate to stay
love my addiction, hate this affliction
a fucking maggot nothing more
crawling through my veins
drenching red all over the floor
always draining from my core
breathe your final words of life
Published 14th Jul 2011
| Edited 12th Dec 2011
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26th Jan 2012 11:29pm
Here a good mystery
Begone My Unfaithful Maiden
bring me my bloody bride
so i can feast upon her suicide
when pain and fear keep me alive
her crimson wine shall make me thrive
But the tension and anger and hatred
Spread in all parts of the poem
Without control over anything
So you
And the concept is an infinite dose of the drug
Making you this poetic image
Without specifying a final for us what is going on in your life split
Here the drug ecstasy
Rather than a poetic image
Believe Scream
May be so
Cry of conscience
But who is the owner of Scream
?
Thank you
Good luck
Begone My Unfaithful Maiden
bring me my bloody bride
so i can feast upon her suicide
when pain and fear keep me alive
her crimson wine shall make me thrive
But the tension and anger and hatred
Spread in all parts of the poem
Without control over anything
So you
And the concept is an infinite dose of the drug
Making you this poetic image
Without specifying a final for us what is going on in your life split
Here the drug ecstasy
Rather than a poetic image
Believe Scream
May be so
Cry of conscience
But who is the owner of Scream
?
Thank you
Good luck
18th Feb 2012 5:39pm
But it's not written in current english, so it is difficult to understand completely for a foreigner like me.
It seems to me that is about an ambiguous relationship. Submision to mistress and drug abuse.
I had strong problems with drugs, many years ago. (Fortunately I quit).
So is really interesting for me.
Please be nice to me: explain to this poor Italian the true meaning of this poem.
Tanks Courtney.
It seems to me that is about an ambiguous relationship. Submision to mistress and drug abuse.
I had strong problems with drugs, many years ago. (Fortunately I quit).
So is really interesting for me.
Please be nice to me: explain to this poor Italian the true meaning of this poem.
Tanks Courtney.
18th Feb 2012 5:46pm
Its actually has many meanings behind it.
Yes, one is drug addiction.
Another is a battle with myself while getting over heartbreak and a betrail.
I was very angry writing this
Yes, one is drug addiction.
Another is a battle with myself while getting over heartbreak and a betrail.
I was very angry writing this
18th Feb 2012 6:19pm
a battle with myself while getting over heartbreak and a betrail...
What do you mean exactly?
You suggested to me this poem for a reason, perhaps.
Write to me if you want ...
I'll be glad. :)
What do you mean exactly?
You suggested to me this poem for a reason, perhaps.
Write to me if you want ...
I'll be glad. :)
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22nd Nov 2013 8:09am
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