deepundergroundpoetry.com
The escape from everything
The escape from everything is death ,
From death you escape all the sins you've made,
All the people you've hurt,
You leave behind your sadness but also with that you leave your saneness,
You also leave behind your happiness,
You also leave your impact on people's life whether it's good or bad it will always stay,
The escape from everything is death,
To die a peaceful death is the ultimate escape.
From death you escape all the sins you've made,
All the people you've hurt,
You leave behind your sadness but also with that you leave your saneness,
You also leave behind your happiness,
You also leave your impact on people's life whether it's good or bad it will always stay,
The escape from everything is death,
To die a peaceful death is the ultimate escape.
Published 20th May 2016
| Edited 11th Jun 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 622
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
20th May 2016 2:49pm
<< post removed >>
20th May 2016 11:36pm
You may feel like the darkness has a tight hold of you now and that death is the only escape, but one day when you least expect it, you will overpower it. You have the power inside of you to remove the poison in your life and to rise above it triumphantly. Nice work.
24th May 2016 3:56pm
There is no escaping it we all will die but you don't have to rush it.. Nice piece
3rd Jun 2016 4:09am
Interesting piece in that you try to convey the positives and negatives of such an escape ...
Writer's note: change weather to whether
Writer's note: change weather to whether
