Prefer staying in the shallows

Really enjoyed this wonderful little piece

Thanks Brotha! Always admired your work, and your words mean a lot!

Cheers!
KDAmB

' My ink will dissipate    
    with the tides of time    
    the words will dissolve    
    taking with them the rhyme! '

As a writer, this is my biggest fear :-(

really clever and well written, certainly thought provoking :-)

Awwe! Thaks Dave! Mate, you truly are too kind.. appreciate every single letter of your feedback! Always have! Well, in my case, wrote this to put myself into place, the insignificance of my works, I've never delved too deep into this art we call poetry and I got no ambitions(or rather say chance) of getting closer to the great/hallowed poets. This work's a mirror to myself- the reality of my works or rather shall I say the insignificance of it.

Cheers!
KDAmB

Your last stanza is hits the nail on the head.

Thank You so much Esme and welcome to DU!
Appreciate your kind feedback and visit!

Cheers!
KDAmB