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Little whore
Body to body,
skin to skin,
I was hooked,
just by your look,
gentle at first,
but that's not my style ,
grabs my hair,
bite my lip ,
your hand wraps around my neck,
from bumps and grinds,
to chains and whips,
leave your mark,
show I'm your yours,
push my face into the bed,
shoving it all in,
moans and screams of sweet relief,
flips me over and makes me beg,
hands above my head,
legs widely spread ,
submissive to your every word,
as the night drags on,
we fuck for hours,
from sweet to bad,
I told you I was your whore.
skin to skin,
I was hooked,
just by your look,
gentle at first,
but that's not my style ,
grabs my hair,
bite my lip ,
your hand wraps around my neck,
from bumps and grinds,
to chains and whips,
leave your mark,
show I'm your yours,
push my face into the bed,
shoving it all in,
moans and screams of sweet relief,
flips me over and makes me beg,
hands above my head,
legs widely spread ,
submissive to your every word,
as the night drags on,
we fuck for hours,
from sweet to bad,
I told you I was your whore.
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Re. Little whore
12th May 2016 8:24am
intense, coupled w/your photo;
can see the blue flames in those blue eyes...
can see the blue flames in those blue eyes...
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Anonymous
14th May 2016 5:29am
Kitten, nice ink.. welcome to DU.. you've got skills..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. Little whore
14th May 2016 5:53am
Thank you. Definitely thrilled by the site. That means a lot to me! Thank you
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14th May 2016 5:52am
Re. Little whore
15th May 2016 11:39am
Wow! Really got to me and even turned me on. You belittle yourself in your various comments but this poem illustrates the deep well of talent residing in you. Take this version of your output and go with it, I would say try to write more erotic poems. You have a flare for it.
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
14th Mar 2018 6:35pm
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14th Mar 2018 7:33pm
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