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When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
When his heart's fixed on a jenny
a fairy means nothing to him
he never deserved your beauty
it's time you moved on, screw him!
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Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
8th May 2016 7:34am
Re: Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
8th May 2016 8:31am
Thanks Linda! Am glad you liked it... what inspired me to write this was tragic cases of jack asses falling for jennies whilst totally oblivious to fairy persona females to whom they mean so much. Obviously they don't deserve those beauties...
Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
8th May 2016 12:16pm
Well put KDAmB I couldn't agree more.
Fairy Personas have a right to their happily ever after endings also !
Fairy Personas have a right to their happily ever after endings also !
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Re: Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
9th May 2016 2:20am
Thank You Bluesky! I welcome your presence here, and yes Fairy personas deserve their happily ever afters but certainly not jack asses...
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
10th May 2016 1:44am
A different side of you coming out in this...I like it :)
Sometimes gentle loving guidance needs a bit of punch to hit home. LR X
Sometimes gentle loving guidance needs a bit of punch to hit home. LR X
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Re: Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
10th May 2016 1:59am
Thank You Liz once again... well my mum used to say that and it was a very common phrase... when someon'e fallen for a she-donkey, a fairy's nothing to him, (just a disclaimer, here I do not mean to compare/fault anyone for chosing whom they chose). Just my view/opinion on the unfortunate instances in life we come across... you said it absolutely right there...sometimes it does need a bit of punch!! :)
Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
10th May 2016 6:48am
Re: Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
10th May 2016 9:51am
Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
13th May 2016 7:57pm
sometimes you've just got to hit back - so much better to do it with words :-)
great stuff :-)
great stuff :-)
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Re: Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
13th May 2016 8:42pm
Awwwe Thanks Dave! absolutely right there! You know that I always admired you and your works and get that kind feedback from you means a lot!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. When his heart's fixed on a jenny..
Anonymous
12th Oct 2017 10:41am
Nice👌
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