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"Masturbation..."
Meanderin' fingers finesse
All to alleviate the haunt of distress
Stimulated by a overwhelmin' fire
Titillatingly, the angst to rub desire
Until wanton greed is pacified
Realms delved, pleasures cried
Beauteous rivulets of honey seep
Altered manipulations fingers creep
Tantalizin' one hardens breast' tip
Indulgin' the other, even deeper slips
O' mighty, gasps, n' moans spasm
Now...
As she screams ecstastic, her
wet pussy's exploded,
into heavenly successive Orgasms...
All to alleviate the haunt of distress
Stimulated by a overwhelmin' fire
Titillatingly, the angst to rub desire
Until wanton greed is pacified
Realms delved, pleasures cried
Beauteous rivulets of honey seep
Altered manipulations fingers creep
Tantalizin' one hardens breast' tip
Indulgin' the other, even deeper slips
O' mighty, gasps, n' moans spasm
Now...
As she screams ecstastic, her
wet pussy's exploded,
into heavenly successive Orgasms...
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 4th May 2016
| Edited 11th May 2016
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4th May 2016 5:20pm
Re. "Masturbation..."
4th May 2016 6:27pm
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4th May 2016 6:29pm
Lol aaawww thank u! But I've read u, n ur highly talented yourself my dear :) appreciate u much :)
Re. "Masturbation..."
4th May 2016 8:01pm
Okay, I'm going to be bold here(probably beacause it's now an ungodly hour) and say, masturbation is probably what keeps me from doing something really stupid. Like you know, finding a random guy to take my virginity. (I'm kidding, of course. XD)
"the angst to rub desire" indeed. Nicely penned, Poetikmind. :)
"the angst to rub desire" indeed. Nicely penned, Poetikmind. :)
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4th May 2016 8:10pm
Against all I am... I offer myself lol thank u sweetness, deeply n truly appreciate you :)
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Oh my goodness, the poetry in the writing and in the drawing is beautiful. Well captured.
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4th May 2016 8:27pm
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Anonymous
5th May 2016 00:11am
PM!!!! GOOD LAWWWWD!!! THAT DRAWING!!! OUTSTANDING!!
DING DING DING DING!!! These words are most excellent and cause nerve endings to tingle! I thank you!!
With love - Taryn xoxo
DING DING DING DING!!! These words are most excellent and cause nerve endings to tingle! I thank you!!
With love - Taryn xoxo
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5th May 2016 1:42am
Aaaawwww thank you sweetheart! Wow, I'm do flattered n so happy to hear u were flustered lol
Re. "Masturbation..."
5th May 2016 2:33am
Mmmm...I do believe you've got this 'down pat' PM...love the drawing... ^_^
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5th May 2016 2:46am
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Anonymous
- Edited 5th May 2016 3:41am
5th May 2016 3:36am
What's going here?
Is that kitten ..mine,
noo jk! lol
but you are so artistically
endowed.. sexy, stimulating
and fucking tasty as hell.
Mmh..
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Is that kitten ..mine,
noo jk! lol
but you are so artistically
endowed.. sexy, stimulating
and fucking tasty as hell.
Mmh..
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5th May 2016 8:03am
Aaaawww... You have me deeply blushing over here woman! thank you so much, n deeply grateful for your thoughts n support :)
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9th May 2016 00:28am
OMG, u came back!? Wow.. thank u, truly appreciate u, but can't help but ask, not too
into the poem? :(
into the poem? :(
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10th May 2016 7:49pm
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10th May 2016 11:19pm
Thank you, I'm glad you felt the heat lol appreciate the time n thoughts n add... :)
Re. "Masturbation..."
11th May 2016 4:06pm
Very nice - as in hot as hell!, and the drawing is outstanding!
A few quibbles (I hope you don't mind; it says you want honest criticism):
Meanderin' fingers finesse
All to alleviate the haunt of distress
Stimulated by a overwhelmin' fire (...an overwhelmin'...)
Titillatingly, the angst to rub desire
Until wanton greed is pacified
Realms will delved, pleasures cried (...realms will be delved...)
Beauteous rivlets of honey seep (...rivulets...)
Altered manipulations fingers creep
Tantalizin' one hardens breast' tip
Indulgin' the other, even deeper slips
O' mighty, gasps, n' moans spasm
Now...
A few quibbles (I hope you don't mind; it says you want honest criticism):
Meanderin' fingers finesse
All to alleviate the haunt of distress
Stimulated by a overwhelmin' fire (...an overwhelmin'...)
Titillatingly, the angst to rub desire
Until wanton greed is pacified
Realms will delved, pleasures cried (...realms will be delved...)
Beauteous rivlets of honey seep (...rivulets...)
Altered manipulations fingers creep
Tantalizin' one hardens breast' tip
Indulgin' the other, even deeper slips
O' mighty, gasps, n' moans spasm
Now...
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11th May 2016 5:00pm
Oh it's fine, I'm very bad at proof reading my work lol I'm aware there may be or are typos in a lot of my posts, as I literally spill n post lol. Thank you so much for your time n thoughts, I appreciate it.
P.S. The biggest problem is I write from my phone n spellcheck "ain't"
that correct lol
P.S. The biggest problem is I write from my phone n spellcheck "ain't"
that correct lol
Re. "Masturbation..."
13th May 2016 4:47am
*fans self* whew this one is a scorcher!! Awesome Artistry
fav lines:
"Realms delved, pleasures cried
Beauteous rivulets of honey seep
Altered manipulations fingers creep "
fav lines:
"Realms delved, pleasures cried
Beauteous rivulets of honey seep
Altered manipulations fingers creep "
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Re. "Masturbation..."
13th May 2016 8:39am
Lol... Yea n that's like uhm yea lol
Thank you sweetness grateful as ever for you :)
Thank you sweetness grateful as ever for you :)
Re. "Masturbation..."
26th May 2016 9:23pm
"Stimulated by a overwhelmin' fire
Titillatingly, the angst to rub desire"
Captivating write love. You're very talented and your artistry is appreciated. 💋💋💋
Titillatingly, the angst to rub desire"
Captivating write love. You're very talented and your artistry is appreciated. 💋💋💋
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27th May 2016 1:42am
My sweetheart, you're so wonderful n I'm so happy to hear your thoughts on my ink, deeply grateful I am for your time and thoughts :)
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27th May 2016 11:46am
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27th May 2016 12:42pm
Mmmmm...that's such a great response lol thank you my dear truly, appreciate you :)
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23rd Jun 2016 6:31am
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